Poetic_Thug VS. Poetic Wun

[Poetic_Thug]

Im a lyrical ninja im not talkin wcw 1 2 3 now i pinned ya
im talkin guillotine swordz slash your umbilical cordz
puttin you in a tomb before you exit the womb
like a shaolin monk the out come of this battle is simple
takin two emei piercers to both sides of your temple
leave you layin on the floor bleedin out you mouth
like i bleed out verses
im snatchin up your soul like theives snatch up purses
ill absorb all your rap battle skill
your lines only bruise mine designed to kill
But still im the Poetic_Thug my rhymes hit like a slug
from the 12 Guage shottie police callin your family to come identify your body.
they found you slit and slashed bleedin out in an alley
lookin like you was beatin and mugged by 2 crack fiends on the streets of cali
the dynamics of my rap tactics are so superfluous
im done now your in the casket bout to be sent into the deep abyss.

[Poetic Wun]

i'ma rip off your poetic & leave the thug defeated
you can use your second post to message the admins & have your account deleted
i ain't even need razor sharp thoughts, i leave you leakin with spare ink
protect your neck with adimantium & i'll still rip out your larynx
i'll prove for you how well you literally bleed out verses
Dr. seuss rhymes, predictable you gunna rhyme "purses"
breakin your phalanx past the point of repair from surgeons
caught you off guard, from the shadows i came lurkin
pull you up to match the whites of your eyes with the black in my optics
revealing the neutron stars that reside in my sockets
then melt your brain with concentrated beams of radiation
all you have left is the aroma of your defecation
you last line of defense
is a humiliating stench
your second to last line makes all too much sense
that word was apparently too much for your thought box
i burn you like Hot sauce
is you still readin? believe it- you just got rocked
sadly it was all off of a teaser rhyme at that
this wasn't even a quarter of half assed
persist & i'll rip your atoms apart/ your just mangled & smashed
next time refer to me as Sifu & gimmie my name back.

[oDoUoSoKo]

tsss talk about makin it obvious.

[Locust]

Lol

[Poetic Wun]

lol aight aight I was crazy slackin, im waiting for round 2 'n ill come wit it
spit Thug, come get it

[oDoUoSoKo]

ima let this rock...ill tell u y when its all over...eloels.

[iniquity]

. dude, is that the same person ? . lol .

[Poetic Wun]

wait wait wait, is that what the little remarks are about?? y'all think we the same cat?
i assumed it was cause my verse sucked dick holes....
whats good dusk

[oDoUoSoKo]

what do you think?

[Poetic Wun]

I hope your comment was about how obviously better his verse was than mine cause my verse sucked dick holes. *somewhere camron is saying no homo for me*

I know who that kid is but it ain't me. he my sotospeak cuzzo. I think I read somewhere you wrote (I think it was you) bring people we know to the site even just to battle. so I figured why not.

I wouldnt pull a lame stunt like creating a new account to battle myself. that doesn't further me lyrically and makes me look shook.

ill take on anybody, word up, but this the only cat wanting to get down. otherwise you don't catch me in your temple cause I don't come here to battle. im just your average wu tang fanatic comin here to socialize about real music.







and comics.






and kung fu flicks.

[Poetic_Thug]

Yo my bad Cuz. been gone for a min yea give me few ima post round two. nah kid this kat is my cousin im just getin into wu now and he showed me this site. but yea ima post something tonight or tomorrow night.

[Poetic_Thug]

Hit you with a kendo stick in your cerebral cortex rock you so hard you fall into an alternate vortex
or an alternate reality this aint mortal combat but nigga im hearin FATALITY
runnin through you like track runners run sprints
this battle is a murda scene and im leavin no prints
im slittin you and slashin you this aint a dream i aint freddy kruger
runnin up on you i got no bullets but i still kill you with the ruger
homie you talking about the aroma of defication thats proof right there our rhymes have no relation
we got people conversin that we the same ass person
they gonna know the truth when i lay down round three that'll hit you like thunda
but i expect no rebuttal cause im puttin you six feet unda
and yea i got some DR Seuss rhymes i call you kat and homie i just killed you nine times.
son dont get back up just sit right down poetic wun's from the slum bitch i got the crown.

[Eradicate]

Poetic wins

[oDoUoSoKo]

lmao^

[Poetic Wun]

been a min but battlin ain't my priority
i'm not sure if i even wanna spit more bars than my years of wucorp seniority
you ain't thuggin,
you buggin
quit frontin
sad to see my own cuzzo step up an'//
get put right back down
let me kick a fact right now
you the only skinny kid i knew that could join the military and looks plumpier right now!
this a wucrop dishonorable discharge yo
all over your face like in some sick porno
i write poetry... thats what i do
that don't make me feel insecure with a need to claim "thug" too
i get raw when i wanna be
and trust me nigga... i havent even put my finger on the trigger cause your family
i said i'd get at you but i never really did
whether its on this site, writin rhymes or years on this earth, i'm always your senior, ---------you still just a kid.
so if i take an L, i take it with a grain of salt
#1 reason, it's basically my fault
your lucky i know you cause lyrically you couldn't see me
i'll save better lines for joebuddenTV
besides if i wanted to even dig in your skin slightly
i wouldn't battle... i'd just go take wifey

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POETIC WINS from the crowds they scream
witful(!?) shit like that anyone coulda seen
but that don't stop Dusk from "lmao"ing
i know your prolly wondering where i am going
lol nowhere... y'all come off dumb as a brick
there. i spelt it out for you in case you didnt get the hint.
so thats 3 votes against me already, got niggas wonderin who am i...
the only nigga y'all see comit a battle su-i-cide