(VOTES NEEDED) locust vs. daliff

[iniquity]

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flow-daliff
punches-daliff
creativity-daliff
vocab-daliff


. nice battle .

[Eradicate]

good work by both writers.

locust i liked your rhymes, they flowed well. some witty punches.

daliff your rhymes were nice as well, killing the wordplay.

overall,
locust i thought ur first verse was straight, the gay jokes were funny but then soon after they just starting getting redundant. What's this "wack" and "i won" banter? (swaying to me it looks) Your second verse was better although i did catch acouple feeding lines, but there were no rules against it.

flow = locust
punches = daliff
multis = locust
wordplay = daliff
personals = tie
nameplay = daliff

v = daliff

[Locust]

aight cool 2-1 for daliff

[daliff89]

bump

[GZAjector]

i gotta go with locust


nothing against the other dude, he was good and all

[Locust]

its a close one! daliff ur a dope battler, i've never had such a close match 2-2

[Slide]

daliff make dope shit! peace man.

[Khem The Decepticon]

Locust

[oDoUoSoKo]

need some elaborated votes

[Drunken Monk]

flow = locust
punches = dali
multis = dali
wordplay = dali
personals = locust
nameplay = daliff

vote for daliff

both wrote smooth shit

[oDoUoSoKo]

3-1

[daliff89]

bump for TKO.....

[Eradicate]

haha mine was finished way before yours =P

[Poetic Wun]

Daliffs grammar game was on point and came better with the flow. i really dug how he switched up hir rhyme scheme in the second round but Locusts seemed more personal with the sig hits even and he came harder in the second round even tho the gay jokes got old.
the lines
"you spit like you're reverting thirteen...
half of you don't understand what half of the shit in my verse means..."
kinda overhyped the verse... it was like sayin something without saying something. locusts had more relative substance despite its simplicity so im rollin wit Locust.

[daliff89]

3-2 bump.