(VOTES NEEDED) Poetic_thug VS. Eradicate

**Poetic_Thug** · 06-19-2009, 01:37 PM

2 rounds 16 bars i'll let you decide who goes first.

**Eradicate** · 06-20-2009, 03:30 AM

I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to battle himself and end up less than second (wtf??)
you want to step w/ legends?, I won't lie, you suck and need to brighten up,
I smoked this bitch with uppercuts, just to leave him high as fuck...
so try your luck..and expect me to kill this bitch, because im real with this
the way I shut this dummy up so quick you'll think im a ventriloquist.
can't feel my fist? This fat fuck bags a bird? only when the lights are off, jerk
Poetic Thug is an oxymoron like sayin Microsoft Works
got dykes w/ hot worth..and you cant fuck with mine though,
Cause speakin on the topic of Def Jam only time you'd Shyne Po
with nine's full, I done figured that these fakes are just so rare
I don't care if you put 'poetry in motion', ya rhymes ain't takin you nowhere
I won't stop till i break you in four pairs, but Thug’s jus soft 'n poor
and when the chips are down, fat fuck’ll eat ‘em off the floor.
stop for more? I'd say just no show, but I'd rather post and win it first...
so fuck a time-limit, the only deadlines'll be in his verse

**Poetic_Thug** · 06-22-2009, 07:33 PM

Damn homie i bet you think you came hard
but it looks like typin on a keyboard from a happy retard
ya poetic_thugs my name and ppl are fiending it
dont get mad yet last night your girl was screamin it
eradicate ha how bout you eradicate all hope of being a
top mc on wu corp or hip hop performer
and instead i will buy you a pretty pink dress and put you on the corner
how your family gonna feel when you turn up as another john doe
nobody can identify your body or whats left of it though.
see i could go psychopathic and start eatin your innerds like they was some chop livers
or i could do it discreetly and quiet but you gettin hit wit a riot.
when im done with you your gonna be in the hospital in your own ward
but i dont know how they do sugery on somebody who lost their spinal cord
why you exept this challenge and go 1st like you got somethin to prove
how son you really that eager to lose
aight dude ima end this thing right here
they call me the last samuri so it slice and dice you till your dead nigga have no fear.

**OB4CL2** · 06-22-2009, 11:01 PM

E got it, imo.

**oDoUoSoKo** · 06-23-2009, 12:19 AM

its not over...and u have to elaborate.

**Eradicate** · 06-23-2009, 02:13 AM

i stay 'Focused' like 'Ford'... leave ya more open than stores
just for provoking this war... you couldnt win if ya 'aliases' were voting in fours
more dope than before.. i heard you even sound like a bitch, this the last call
cause your voice so 'high pitched' it probably comes with a fast ball
and if i ask yall..thug's a fake so imma show ya frontin
only mad cause he couldn't get a girl in bed with Robatusin
this foe is nothing..harmin him while rippn arms n' limbs, keepn flesh in cold basements
so what's dumber, callin' me out or you trying to guess your location??
keep ya text in rotation, pm's me politely says he dont like beef,now this loser aims to fight dons?
only thing he's ever "flipped" was a coin to see what user name to sign on (hmmm..)
this guy's wrong.. his spellin', dont get me started
if you see him in the streets, he aint throwin' up gang signs, he's just fuckin' retarded
I buck w/ the hardest and end careers, so spit wack in this fight,
and your auto-login'll be the only one who remembers you, when you comeback on this site

clownin'.....
when time let's him.. he'll post pictures of him and his best friend - texting & wrestling
but then realized nobody can see his imaginary friend, 'cept him (lol)

**Poetic_Thug** · 06-23-2009, 01:00 PM

ha ha raggin on me cause you think i got 2 accounts
yo you pissed off the dragon and this tigers about to pounce
ima MAUL you appall you with my vast vocabulary
i aint yankin your arm you gonna need more than a scapulary
now you opened the cage and let out this lyrical demon
your last rebuttle if thats what you wanna call i used to catch my semen
so i see you battle everyday is that what you do to keep from gettin sof
you talkin bout Robatusin if it wasnt for shit like that you'de never get off.
why you think i challenged you cause when it came to battlin you had no fear
congradulations guess what your still the biggest queer.
your suckin a hole lot a dick and lickin a hole lot of ass
i dont know how you find the time to still talk all this white trash
so hold this right here i mean the bullet between your eyes
or the pussy between your thighs whichever one hurts more after you read this post
how you gonna battle something you cant see im the rap battle ghost.
now let me lay it down cause i thought i already told ya
you gonna die tryin to battle a really MP Soulja.

**OB4CL2** · 06-23-2009, 10:09 PM

i can't decide this time. both were ill

**Poetic Wun** · 06-23-2009, 10:48 PM

them lines about him bein me were lame.

the second time both were ill but eradicate had more punches and over all he was more consistent. thugs first attempt seemed like he was reaching

sorry nig, gotta roll with eradicate on this one.

**RALPH WIGGUM** · 07-09-2009, 02:38 PM

The first time Eradicate definitely came harder, the end was dope : "so fuck a time-limit, the only deadlines'll be in his verse ".
Poetic Thug was more struggling, that line was hot tho :
"ya poetic_thugs my name and ppl are fiending it
dont get mad yet last night your girl was screamin it"
The second time, both were really good, but Eradicate still won it in my opinion. Nice wordplays, and on both he had the best punchlines.
Eradicate got a bit too focused on the "secondary attacks", but overral, he wins.

**SisterFister** · 07-12-2009, 04:26 PM

1st Round: Eradicate- You had some decent punchlines, i thought your "dummy" line was the hardest(though i've seen many ventriloquist punches before, & they worded ALOT better, so work on your wording IMO), good job having multies(your opponent didn't have any so that's a plus)

Poetic Thug- You had some humor, but that's about it, no hard hitting punchlines or any good wordplay.i would say add multies to make your flow better & make your overall verse better

2nd Round: Eradicate- Better verse than in the 1st round. I thought your first line was wack(2 corny ideas). You had some really good personals in this verse & the multies were better

Poetic Thug- Your verse was also better this round, but still not good enough. I liked the "scapulary" line, good concept. The rest of your punches were just lame. Once again, add multies to your verse to make it better, it's just too bland the way it is now

Overall: eradicate(Harder punchlines, better concepts, good personals, good multies & flow)

**Eradicate** · 07-12-2009, 05:04 PM

poetic - thanks for the time to vote, of course you would think those lines were lame.
dirt - thanks also for voting, secondary attacks?? please explain
sister - also appreciate the vote, and the feed.. ya i hear that alot work on wording.. i like how you emphasize ALOT. maybe i can see some of your work and you can show me?

poetic - good battle, only took 3 weeks.. not bad.