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    Default FLYING DARTS!! For real shit

    I'd like some criticism, I need to sharpen my blade.

    * Dr. Death

    I'm on that hood shit, lock picks,
    Ya head sticks to the pavement, paid with
    blood, no funds, the gun clicked
    3 times, real quick-
    cant snitch now,
    ya just heard POW,
    got hit, heart quit,
    then shit, in ya pants,
    everybody 'round ya glanced
    up from they Bible,
    knew my title, makes a man forget,
    squeal my tires, take a hit,
    fast split, on my way
    back to the hideout
    god gave me another day,
    I'm bigger than the law,
    in the Pen I will never stay,
    even though I nightly slay
    all the cops that rightly pray
    on they knees "love and peace"
    thats not the kind of life I lead,
    my mind only knows greed,
    soul agreed long ago,
    won't mislead, I love dough,
    plus weed, thats what I grow,
    and when I need I move a little blow,
    just enough, its apropos,
    ain't gotta bluff its powder snow,
    fucks ya mind twice, if ya tough, in a couple snuffs,
    rollin dice for ya life when you step to my device,
    to be precise I'm Dr. Death,
    ain't let a patient live yet.



    *Cost of a Beaten Case
    Up early at the crack of dawn, fuck the yawns,
    I'm wide awake.
    Jotting down my rhymes, pen and pad,
    album gotta make
    a quarter mill to cover bills,
    the cost of a beaten case.
    Shoulda used my head, coulda saved,
    bought another place,
    Instead I used his skull to break
    a window at his mother's place.
    Seen by a mouse, who just happened by the house,
    earth never woulda spoke till they caught her son with coke.
    She didn't know who it was, just a figure
    with his eyes low from the smoke,
    blunts glow, I burn & toke slow.
    They gave her CREAM to ID me
    but they never thought I'd see the
    crooked tricks the law plays
    just to haze the rules they praise,
    I couldn't fold so I found out what she was owed,
    by the pigs. So she'd forget we made a deal;
    I doubled it in gold.


    *'Vilitary Flow
    In the Wu Corp towers pussies cower,
    cuz they know they fate,
    its too late to turn, or to learn, or to flee the state,
    plus borders can't confine me, the Fed's never had a case
    I move like a spy, rob em dry, never leave a trace
    of evidence, my 7th sense, scans scenes with mad haste,
    it leaves bad tastes in mouths when I've been to your town,
    no paste can erase the poison hidden by your frown,
    which grows stiff, blue lips, you've become a plain noun,
    like "corpse", not proper, just another one down
    who wouldn't bow to my crown, hunt you down just like a hound,
    my dog pounds profound, all around, not a soul will run,
    its never fun, they can't beat, or hide from the 7 Suns.

    They pull heat, then see it hit me like a water gun,
    its just about as deadly as a child facing 1 million Huns,
    my glare stuns crowds, clouds shun sunlight,
    then I move many tons, got the cloak of the night.
    Only God can see I move just as much as I like.
    On the mic its the same, got untameable rhymes and game,
    like crime names ya know, so the industry I'm told
    recognizes masterminds who got that 'Vilitary Flow,
    I'm a stones throw from legendary, next on my itinerary
    dig a rapper cemetery, all the fake MC's are buried
    by my earthquake, put to sleep, never had a wake,
    they try to place blame on my crew, like the "W"
    and focus on a troubled few, they feel like they're overdue.
    Their informant knew some Stark's crew
    was hangin' out, little did they know what their rat was gonna do.
    He started getting fat stacks, fuck the force, fuck goin back,
    so bid ado to the badge, got his bitch a shiny jag,
    had girls on the side for when she was on the rag.
    Got his information, fed pigs slop that wasn't half true,
    misinformation had em bustin kids at Knox Zoo,
    set up my enemies, Cops catch them accidentally,
    they ain't free now, unless they sing I guess they'll never be.
    But honestly, they're better off,
    old and soft, the century you're bound to serve will render thee member of AARP
    with discount admission fees, buy one get one free,
    Don't let em take all the hard candy,
    glass jar, peppermints that kinda pit around the tooth
    like corner booth's at Buddy's BBQ,
    high school it was our place, always hot fudge cakes,
    for dessert, after games,
    beat the heat, watch for rain,
    wonder where we'd drink, where we'd spit our game
    to pretty girls, guzzling a case then a handle plus a couple more,
    drink and drive, not either/or,
    "never give a fuck" allure,
    thought I knew myself, but I didn't, and I wanted more,
    explore the inner mind I've ignored, not anymore, a fucking god of war,
    look for my minds open shore
    to invade, fog fades, and
    I wade ashore,
    my blade soars through the bush and brain,
    clear paths, to explore more
    than what I was before,
    I heard that sacred lore
    that implored me to ignore
    that which floods the world,
    I soar above and I do adore
    to view the world as much more
    than a box for our toys and war
    this is pure, not a whore,
    but the pleasure's hardcore
    you could have it too, its all about what you look for.



    * Zig-Zag

    With the zig-zag-zig
    I dropped my cig
    dropped the bottle
    and I flipped my wig
    I left the cave
    Got more minds to save
    from the shameful existence
    of establishmental dependance
    Truth be told
    truth is something to be sold
    Manipulated and controlled
    by those with gold
    Who decry intelligence
    for snobbish arrogance
    while praising ignorance
    as plain old common sense
    85 believe this shit
    and waste their mental gifts
    Convenience is their master
    They want a simple answer
    Just 10 word solutions
    For crime rates and pollution
    What they get are just illusions
    But its consenting confusion
    No stomach for reality
    truth becomes a fallacy
    the wise become the hated
    while the evil are celebrated
    Knowledge is legislated
    while truth is invalidated
    facts replaced with hatred
    and you callin this education?
    I call it "legal mind control"
    that shapes the ebb and flow
    of our world and society
    so dont lie to me
    I've got eyes that see
    my mind I set fee
    dissent I must lead
    against the ten who seek greed
    and deliberately mislead
    Our knowledge is like the the seed
    which grows into a tree
    In a landscape thats bleak
    we rise for all to see
    "All is not what it seems"
    Last edited by DJ_JayEzzy; 06-29-2009 at 09:33 AM. Reason: D and * formed emoticon, fucking shit up

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    check outta peoples joints and they'll or should return da favor

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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    check outta peoples joints and they'll or should return da favor
    Ahhh shit, I didnt even think of that ha

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    darts are nice, nice simple flow that is tight wanna see mo

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