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    the North Star's true fist
    sparred with you then blew a kiss
    scar tissue with a new twist
    Mars' blue moons exist afar to brew trysts

    a sparrow fell from the sky while all along He knew when and why
    Cupid's arrows fly strong 'til you and I align parallel like Gemini
    perilous nights narrow my sight toward a place where Heaven's caress is nigh
    to marry men with the Most High again, Mary's gracious Son was sent to die

    stripped nude, whipped and affixed to a crucifix
    eucharistic mists soothe bruised spirits afflicted with due remiss
    beautiful Vintage sips hit a smitten worshiper's two lips
    once bitten, forgiven of cursed sins and christened with renewed bliss

    twice shy mythical figures skinny-dip in the River Styx
    ripple effects stretch nice and wide and high tides wrecked the triple-six
    fools chewed the vineyard's forbidden fruits, didnt listen or stick to the Script
    Leviathan's suitors hidden by suits of pewter inwardly slipped in the crypt's abyss
    Last edited by War and Peace; 08-27-2009 at 02:37 PM.

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    This is mastery of imagery and vocab. Art and prophecy intertwined. Very well done, fam.

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    I echo Picasso's words, that first section was ridiculous...

    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    the North Star's true fist
    sparred with you then blew a kiss
    scar tissue with a new twist
    Mars' blue moons exist afar to brew trysts

    a sparrow fell from the sky while all along He knew when and why
    Cupid's arrows fly strong 'til you and I align parallel like Gemini

    perilous nights narrow my sight toward a place where Heaven's caress is nigh
    to marry men with the Most High again, Mary's gracious Son was sent to die


    "The North Star's True Fist"
    Now thats a serious opening line.

    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    stripped nude, whipped and affixed to a crucifix
    eucharistic mists soothe bruised spirits afflicted with due remiss
    beautiful Vintage sips hit a smitten worshiper's two lips
    once bitten, forgiven of cursed sins and christened with renewed blis
    Poet Laureate

    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    twice shy mythical figures skinny-dip in the River Styx
    ripple effects stretch nice and wide and high tides wrecked the triple-six
    fools chewed the vineyard's forbidden fruits, didnt listen or stick to the Script
    Leviathan's suitors hidden by suits of pewter inwardly slipped in the crypt's abyss
    Seriously, some of the best stuff I've read from you
    Could tell this took pride of place when being delivered.

    You need to bless the temple more often bro.

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    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    the North Star's true fist
    sparred with you then blew a kiss
    scar tissue with a new twist
    Mars' blue moons exist afar to brew trysts

    a sparrow fell from the sky while all along He knew when and why
    Cupid's arrows fly strong 'til you and I align parallel like Gemini
    perilous nights narrow my sight toward a place where Heaven's caress is nigh
    to marry men with the Most High again, Mary's gracious Son was sent to die

    stripped nude, whipped and affixed to a crucifix
    eucharistic mists soothe bruised spirits afflicted with due remiss
    beautiful Vintage sips hit a smitten worshiper's two lips
    once bitten, forgiven of cursed sins and christened with renewed bliss

    twice shy mythical figures skinny-dip in the River Styx
    ripple effects stretch nice and wide and high tides wrecked the triple-six
    fools chewed the vineyard's forbidden fruits, didnt listen or stick to the Script
    Leviathan's suitors hidden by suits of pewter inwardly slipped in the crypt's abyss
    this was pure post detonation poetry hahahaha

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    Damn man, thats some ill shit

    i bet it would sound ill one a spoken word tip, over some mellowed out ot spaced out sounding beat, for sho feelin this drop!

    you need a mic and a program to record then send it my way so i can use it for an intro to a track lol

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