(VOTES NEEDED) Visions Unseen VS. Eradicate

[Eradicate]

20 lines...

1 verse, no feeding.

explained votes..

[Visionz]

This guy knows E's rad but wantin' my dick to get ate?
NO HOmo fag, get off my plate and find some new taste
My Visions are too futuristic they remain Unseen
You can find this guy joining the Navy in pink cut-off jeans
Grabbing for a bib and making a request to come clean
I'm stormtrooping like a Marine, first killer on the scene
Hold more sting than Costco bottles of Listerine
This dude's style is more bitch than Cosmo magazine
Reminiscing bout' Frisco n Crisco when someone mentions tag-team
Ripped seams and curdled screams, a nightmare for most is his wet dream
Just the type of fag I hate, punch heavyweight to decimate Eradicate
The time ain't tickin its already too late, sendin invitations to seal your own fate
Psychopathic mindstate dominates the landscape
Get your guts scraped by killer apes and hold you together with duct tape
Fuck that fake talk that you really ain't walking
You can preach the violence, I got my piano wire, stalkin
Hawkin on a victim in a HUD house lookin Urkel, won't stop till the blood gurgles
Your whole life swirls right before your eyes, prayin this ain't the day you die
But the words are eternal and you can't outlast it
I'll be there to throw the dirt on your casket

[Eradicate]

quit your day job you aint gonna blow, nope
because if THIS is what yall call good Vision, then Lens Crafters is gonna go broke
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet (unseen???
so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it
your crib is worthless william shatner couldn't get A price for tour guides
plus I'll put such a hurtin' on Vision he'll be A sight for sore eyes
i havent battle here in awhile but i'm workin' to retire V
one punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like ya personal diary
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
the slope of this guy..that's been claiming he's ill or dope in disguise
This site had it's sight on greatness until Vision opened his eyes!
your 30, nerdy.. hang out in chatroom's and watch kid's dancing
im your worst enemy, like it's dateline NBC and im Chris Hansen
vision take's hand out's.. anything to stop the show
so i'll just give u an El-Vis like The King of Rock 'N Roll.......

[daliff89]

Visions

i don't understand why people still use a mono-syllabic rhyme scheme.....

a lot of your punches were weak

jbunch of gay jokes really, no name play, saying you're a killer, etc...

just doesn't seem like a battle verse IMO, more like something you'd spit on a song

Eradicate

i thought a lot of your punches were weak too

the Dateline punch is overused (though it's usually used in the 'can't fuck with the kid' sense), i really don't like the 'Elvis' line either, just seemed kinda corny

i didn't change my facial expression at all reading either verse..........Eradicate had more punches, more nameplay, and more multis.....

VOTE: Eradicate

now can i get a vote on my battle?

[Eradicate]

Well thank you Daniel.. i'll try to make it doper for you next time

[Poetic Wun]

i'm go wit E on this.
i thought he had better punches and more multirhymes.
he opened with a killer line and even though his hits digressed it was at least constant especially being that he strayed from the gay jokes & murdered his name.

VU fluctuated more where he had a hit here & there his duds kept the tone flat.
gay jokes seem to be e-cheap shots.

[oDoUoSoKo]

you kno VU makes the sound view, right? was that intentional? like that Velvelt Underground compilation? eloels.

[Poetic Wun]

^lol you was the only cat i thought would get that... (not that it was completely witful)
but unless you get what i meant about "fluctuated" it don't count lol

[Professor]

Eradicate easily won this..

this site is a joke..what do yall base ya votes on?? what is a battle verse in most of yalls opinon?? Knowledge?? multi's, punches, and creativity wins battles..shit that make ya laugh.. shit that make ya say ooohhh..maybe I am just an old head thinking of old days..

[oDoUoSoKo]

old days? gtfo....battles WERE NOT bout punches and multis in the old days, how old are you? lmao. OOOOOHHH

[iniquity]

. eradicate got this .

[just_leroy]

Im votin 4 eradicate nice punch usin visions name against him made and you made the flow like a marvel comic how the flow followed vision from work to death but the elvis punch was a sure miss vision son you bellyd up smarten up or quit your day job

[food for thought]

Eradicate

[RALPH WIGGUM]

Eradicate wins this imo.

[SKAMPOE]

Visionz