Palehorse vs. DUSK

[PALEHORSE]

when i step up on the scene this cat best make way
when i pull out the glock its fucking judgement day
ill run up in your crib grab your herb and your ice
you know that im a nasty cracker far from nice
so step the fuck back before your ass get got
im in camoflague fatigues with a barrel thats hot
ill run up in your crib and smack your mom in the lip
po nine try to catch me but i give them the slip
you roll up in your whip im tring to pick the lock
ill roll thru your hood yelling suck my cock
when you see me on the streets kid give me respect
or else the fucking ground be a new shade of red

[oDoUoSoKo]

Palehorse is getting broken in when i rope him in
with a strong case of broken chin, why the long face?
i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace
and ya mouth got a schlong taste
my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors
have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)
c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims
i dim lights for rappers with conspiracy theories
if ur hearin my clearly, ill kick ya fuckin rear thru ya ear piece
u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes

[Poetic Wun]

idk if this is over yet buuuut...

c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims

lol

u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes

nice

if theres another round i suggest Pale step it up.
otherwise Dusk is the bouncer for the monkey bars... you cant hang my nig

[PALEHORSE]

hahaha alright. its not over yet......

[PALEHORSE]

alright, you cats all know my steez
the flows i be kicking putting bitches on their knees
when i step up on the scene, front you cats some respect
all these hoes know that kid pale come correct
whether rocking tommy hill, nautica or perry ellis
birds all flock and say fuck them other fellas
you say you want to battle? well bring it trick please
swatting MCs off my nuts like a doggie scratches fleas
im coming straight from the slums, a mothering fucking default
your mom be pulling tricks like a 5 dollar crack whore
im dipping through your hood with my man and the heat
when i pull this post you feeling nothing but defeat
so back the fuck up yo im just about to peak
and ask lancaster police ill leave you lying in a creek
hahaha word up respect that hoe hhhaa

[SID]

have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)

haha.

[PALEHORSE]

haha yea that line is even funnier if you know the whole story. its kinda an inside joke between us

[SID]

right...

[HZA HECTOR]

Behold a palehorse/
hit yah wit the dark side of the jedi force/
knock your starship off course/
from dusk too red dawn/bitch be gone/
you fuck'n wit the underworld def deal'n/
hell spawnz/hza,skampope,palehorse vs. Drunkenmonk,mangani,dusk

[Poetic Wun]

this dude needs some medication

[Mumm Ra]

have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)

u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused

really liked those lines (lol at part lizard)

i think dusk killed it tho

[pRoTeChTyAnEcK]

*I'm feelin Dusk more than Palehorse on this one*...Good shit though.

I was under the impression that the thread title is Dusk vs. Palehorse

I don't see where it says...

Dusk vs. Palehorse vs.
HZA HOT GARBAGE.

[PALEHORSE]

alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism

[pRoTeChTyAnEcK]

alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism

Your battle lines were very basic...Nothing wrong with it as long as you can keep up the rhyme in bars, but try using metaphors & other wordplay.
Use more clever ways of attack.


Here are a couple lines from Dusk that I liked:

"i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace"

"my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors"

[Mumm Ra]

also I'd try to use more multi-syllable rhymes instead of day/way or ice/nice
like how dusk did theories/ ear piece and magnitute/dragon fused

peace