(VOTES NEEDED) Dusk v. Poem

**oDoUoSoKo** · 11-12-2009, 10:32 AM

eloels..thx bro..can u elaborate a little tho?

**food for thought** · 11-12-2009, 10:50 AM

i vote Poetic

he killed the second verse. and also his first but it was hard to read and comrehend (because of all the "="s and ";" LOL)

but still, his wordplay and imagery was ill

btw, idk shit about hte comic theme LOL

**MaXiMus Da MaNtis** · 11-12-2009, 04:17 PM

ehh i was gonna vote but i got tierd of reading.......i'll come back and read the last three parts later

**THE MASON** · 11-12-2009, 06:05 PM

my vote goes to poetic

dusk had an overall better flow but poetic dropped some heavy lines that took it for me.

i didnt catch the comic lines, but points for being creative lol

good battle yall

**Bobda Buildah** · 11-14-2009, 07:27 PM

another 4 dusk

**Poetic Wun** · 11-14-2009, 07:50 PM

^ ill name but:

Originally Posted by Dusk
when people vote, simply saying the name is not enough for deciding a winner, its not fair for the Battlers...so u CAN say their name, and also explain a little, a lil less than a paragraph, explaining is good detail why u chose who u chose..

also im changing the vote guidelines..something simpler..also when u use it, still explain a bit why u chose who u chose,

Flow
Creativity
Punches
Vocab

these will be the only four necessary from now on. still takes some work. So i ask you battlers, Please cooperate, and this Section will be one to talk about again....

**food for thought** · 11-14-2009, 07:51 PM

^lol where did your pull that from?

ive never read that before

**Poetic Wun** · 11-14-2009, 07:55 PM

it's the very first thread in this sub forum.
right above the "Call Out GLOVE SLAP thread"
lol i don't think anyone ever notices it.

you and bronze should be cool but bambinoTTT and buildah got some 'splainin' to do'