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Thread: (VOTES NEEDED) Dusk v. Poem

  1. 12-10-2009, 07:12 PM #31
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    i vote poetic.. all around better... delivery of words ,creativity of words.dusk threw me off with the "new mex ,boarder line pheonix" line. a single line ruined it....
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  2. 12-10-2009, 10:34 PM #32
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    comic reference..but ok.

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  3. 12-11-2009, 06:33 PM #33
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    dont get me wrong my man, you got flow. it just sounded like you forced that ryme....keep doin your thing son, im feelin the majority of your isht
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