thatKid vs iniquity

[thatKid]

1 round
16 lines max

He accepted from the glove slap thread. I'll key something soon

[thatKid]

iniq's a whack punk, couldn't lift weight in space
kids straight staying on ass in this like a wheelchair race
so how think you come correct, awakening to his death
couldn't collect puzzle pieces, so how you expect to connect
I'm kicking raps up sky high, you a drama queen
you went from battling queers to fulfilling cinderellas dream
congrats faggit, I'm staying with the belt around my waist
only time you come out with the V. when you copy and paste
I've come for ya head even though its midget size
only time you fists connecting with french fries
giving you fillers but still enough to knock kid out
couldn't drop as a cloud, can't defeat me as I shout
and I've done enough to beat you when the time comes
cause bitch, only time you getting money chilling with bums
I tried giving you props, but you done and wasted my time
leave me bloody? motherfucker couldn't knockout a mime

I think its 16 lines. Just got really bored. Your turn.

[iniquity]

i'ma kill this niggas dreams, like the bullet that went in dr king

i didn't know fags got belts for getting pounded in the anal ring

then cork his head till his last memory spill, soaked in seroquel

put him back in pleasantville with a glass of nyquil and his anxiety pills

right by the bloody mill on the hill where many holy wars were fulfilled

nada but waste hanging from his waist displaced in purgatory

between the inventory, and doctor vulture's laboratory

how you try to father my style and end up on maury?

claiming you tried to stay low key but got fame from rock like barry gordy?

kid i'm over your head, land of the dead, put chest to defrost

mouth and italian bread, pillow over head, neck getting flossed

bed and tomato sauce, breaking news: thatKID was beaten and eaten

by a pack of heathens possessed by demons, armed with a pack of wheat thins

ya niggas sleepin', i put tusk to dusk and bloody ya umbrellas fellas

to let ya see this fruity rican's nothing more than an aurora borialis

but back to thatKID, and his lame lines about time and mimes

fuck i'll salivate, mortify and break you down with enzymes

till you're small enough to crush between the structure of time

[Poetic Wun]

easily iniquity...
i dont really have an explanation but it didnt seemed like kid wasnt all in.
his first bar was lame and then onto the gay jokes and it just seemed like he coulda done better.

iniquitys maury line was pretty funny.

anyway 1 for INIQUITY

[Metalfist]

iniquity hands down.... (even though he passed the bar requirement)
thekid bars were way to simple.
I think if he took his time on this battle, his verse would have been better
BTW that Maury line was fucking great.

[iniquity]

. thx guys, 2-0 .

[food for thought]

iniquity

for reasons already stated..and...more creative better wordplay

[iniquity]

. 3-0 = k.o?

[food for thought]

dont forget to vote in other battle threads as well...

[iniquity]

. 3-0 = k.o?

?

[Braindead]

Iniquity hands down, rhyme structure was killer. Plus that Maury line!

[oDoUoSoKo]

ya its a ko