HollywoodRealty AKA Da Butcher (Official Thread)

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-11-2006, 07:13 PM

ive got a golden trumpet thats controling your movement like a puppet
when i squeez the keys you scream out, hey man i love it
nobody wants it, like foster kids, not knowing who their papa is
growing up in the slums of a metropolis
batman aint stoppen this, neverending robbin and sobbin
its a game of take and give, thats how we live, its never stopen
im choppen up lines, like razor blades, for heavens sake
with all these sins, how is god gonna let me in through heavens gates
i got piles of thoughts compiled, saved on computer files
so many rhymes, when its time to spit, we gonna be hear for a while
its a trial by error, for a trial by jury
who is the bearer of the terror, all this shit to get the jewelry
the bling and fancy things, big car's, bigger cigars
while kids starving, ribs are carving, did we take this shit too far
the hills have eyes, the walls have ears
im hearing voices in the sky, they got me living a life of fear
a celestial sphere where bodies appear to be projected
am i seeing this clear, gotta beware and stay protected
i sat and reflected on my past, how time moves fast
not even a meteoroligist could of seen the quite storm forecast

peace yo, i wrote this while listening to another one of the mantis aka grandmassive beats, this time i used "the trilogy"
here is the link, listen along while u read

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=2875243

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-13-2006, 06:43 AM

Any feed?

VernakuLa · 07-13-2006, 03:58 PM

i read that over the beat, yo u gotta take some words out lol, your sayin too much in one line

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-13-2006, 05:11 PM

naw yo u keep saying that, but i will record it to audio and u will see how nice it flows, peace yo

VernakuLa · 07-14-2006, 11:53 AM

Originally Posted by hollywoodrealty

naw yo u keep saying that, but i will record it to audio and u will see how nice it flows, peace yo

like im not dissing you, dont take it the wrong way its just...when i read it over the beat 4 or 5 lines had a fucked up flow, just constructive criticism...grow from it don't dismiss

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**hollywoodrealty** · 07-14-2006, 01:06 PM

ok

**Edgar Erebus** · 07-14-2006, 01:12 PM

Goddammit, this is a strong song, I mean... wow, the subject matter is fiyah. No problem with the flow in my opinion.

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-14-2006, 04:50 PM

thanks for the feedback slim t, i guess everyone can interpriate things there own way, im glad u could connect with what i was spitten, peace

VernakuLa · 07-14-2006, 04:55 PM

Originally Posted by hollywoodrealty

ok

u dont have to take the comment then, fuck, but mind you, this is coming from a fellow lyricist, just noticing patterns homie, im not dissing you

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-14-2006, 05:05 PM

i never said u dissed me, i said ok, vernaphrodite

VernakuLa · 07-14-2006, 05:33 PM

Originally Posted by hollywoodrealty

i never said u dissed me, i said ok, vernaphrodite

w/e dude, dont improve your shit, fine by me

im out

**jallainINS** · 07-14-2006, 05:34 PM

jeeze man sometimes just loosen up. i mean i know when i finish a rhyme im always like hell yeah this is fire. and it sucks to get any comment that isnt positive. but sometimes you just gotta take it in stride. be thankful for any feed. and nak he wasnt really dissin u either he just didnt believe you either way you two should just stop now before any hatred grows from somethin so dumb.

**hollywoodrealty** · 07-14-2006, 06:02 PM

jallain, if u were to tell me something was good or bad, or u wanted to give me your input, positive or negative, i would respect that and take it in, but look at vern's track record, he goes after me for no reason, just read through my thread here and u would see, so trust me, opinions matter and count, and people's feedback on this site is what helps me improve daily, but there are certain people, like tuco or vern, that never have anything good to say. thats my 2 cents, peace

VernakuLa · 07-14-2006, 09:01 PM

Originally Posted by hollywoodrealty

jallain, if u were to tell me something was good or bad, or u wanted to give me your input, positive or negative, i would respect that and take it in, but look at vern's track record, he goes after me for no reason, just read through my thread here and u would see, so trust me, opinions matter and count, and people's feedback on this site is what helps me improve daily, but there are certain people, like tuco or vern, that never have anything good to say. thats my 2 cents, peace

i was leaving honest feed lol, consider our beef squashed, but on the real, keep doin your thing homie, MY 2 cents

word up

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**hollywoodrealty** · 07-19-2006, 06:48 PM

life is sweet, i come back like the Heat and defeat
all you Mavericks, ya'll dont wanna see my bag of tricks
I got a magician's hat, but i dont pull out rabbits
i pull out automatics, it all adds up, do the mathamatics
it might be traumatic, take your life, thats how i subract
im charismatic, possesing the ability to attract
now thats a fact, no longer a hypothesis
i use calculus and the theory of limits to produce my anaylis
i do a dialysis with the seperation of substances
i make it dificult for you just like encumbrances
life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down
nobody's playing around, this aint no carnival fool
my words serve as an essential component, call it the cardinal rule
the microphone's my tool, bout to school you like a profesor
brainwash you, control your thoughts just like an oppressor
nothing lesser, confinent and assertive, known as a aggressor
im the king, who is worthy of being my successor
feel the pressure, enough to make your head explode
solve the hidden code in order to have the truth exposed

i wrote this over another one of "mantis" aka "grandmassive" beat, this one called divide and conquer, here is the link if u wanna listen while u read along

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=2875258