HollywoodRealty AKA Da Butcher (Official Thread)

[GuardianOne]

I'll reply on friday

Peace

[hollywoodrealty]

my mind' a seed, somebody planted, fertilized it
watered it, and let the sun beam on it
went from a seed into a stem and before you know it
i turned into hemp, most of the world grows it
started mass producing exact replica's of me
together, we grew from a stem into a tree
we were stuck and hidden in between corn and wheat fields
camoflage berage, this shit was like a force field
but one day some dudes came running through with macheties
cut us loose from the ground, but most of us were ready
steadily stacked us and put in the back of the pick up truck
drove a lil while and stopped, what the fuck
they took us out and hung us upside down to dry
took away water, fertilizer, and the sun we needed to survive
they left us for days and nights to sit and dry up
then they took us down before we fried up
hacked, stacked and squeezed into bricks
packed, strapped, and hid into containers
put on a slip then shipped from the lands of jamaica
slid into port everglades and thats when these 3 dudes with shades
came searchen around saying "we aint playen no games"
but somehow, the dogs never sniffed us out,
later on that night the forklift came to lift us out
they took the shipment and slipped it on this cat's big rig
drove us str8 into this huge wharehouse, this shit was sick kid
then they finally let us out, we were
seperated, measure and weighted
chopped up and stuffed in huge bags i felt violated
now we were all in zip locks zipped up
different dealers came in to pick up their shipment
this crazy dred came in and took me, along with 5 others
my last brothers
he threw us in his trunk under the spare tire
im getting tired
my life's been flipped upside down
i went from living in peace to being seperated into pieces
it feels like im going to drown
i was split into nickels, then nickels to dimes,
dimes to quarters, doubling everytime
cats roll me up, commence the blunt passen
quarters to ounces, soon the pounds started blasten
traffic and cant seek alternate routes
dig into my roots and see the bloody truth
the dred bought me for twenty g's, doubled his profit
rolls up my best bud's, started to puff it
i went from seed to weed then the weed turned to ashes and smoke
inhale the knowledge, exhale the toxins with every toke
my weed is his business, and his business is your pleasure
you are the seed that grows and shows that wisdom is the treasure

[Unforgiven]

that was fucking tight!

[GuardianOne]

Its quite a descriptive verse,and flowed well for such a entricate verse. And long also.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

[hollywoodrealty]

thanks for the comments guardian and northstar, check out my next one i drop about a bomb technition

[hollywoodrealty]

this ainta bomb threat, you heard the ticken
magaiver state of mind, quick thinken, quit shitten
theres no time to spare, bomb explodes in 3 minutes
evacuate the place, everybody starts trippen
get trampled bcuz people aint careful
run for your lives
everyman for himself,children and wives,
first
whats worse is there's no time to call the experts
so da butchers jumpen in this shit for what its worth
which line should i cut first, red or black
and whats this yellow one,
1 wrong move and we're all gone
step back to analyze the situation
i cant get the damn ticken out my head, im running out of patience
2 minutes left, people getting stuck in the staircase
someone stuck this bomb up inside a leather briefcase
i gotta crack the code like davinci
is this a dream, or a joke, somebody pinch me
reality hit me when i saw the sticks of dynomite
if i pull them off it sets the trigger for them to ignite
somebody get me some scissors, im gonna cut this line
if i get it wrong every mother fucker's gonna die
i close my eyes and i start cutten
this shit is still ticken, damnit that didnt do nothin
there about 100 wires and i only got a minute left
but im still cool, i yell, somebody get me a cigarette
i light it up, damn it i had enough
i gotta find the one that will save us from blowing up
all of a sudden i remembered something i saw on the discrovery
channel about how to dismantel a bomb, from a to z
watching tv high got u watching some stupid shit,
never in my life did i think id have to use it
but now all of a sudden i held the key to the mystery
i hold the answer to saving everyone's mysory
i cut the red and yellow one and the ticken finally stopped
my heart nearly stopped but i ended up on top
the mayor gave me the key to the city
taken pictures holden babies, all the ladies kissen me
even got interviewed on larry king live
im the butcher flyen back to the killer be hive

[TUCO]

this ainta bomb threat, you heard the ticken
magaiver state of mind, quick thinken, quit shitten
theres no time to spare, bomb explodes in 3 minutes
evacuate the place, everybody starts trippen
get trampled bcuz people aint careful
run for your lives
everyman for himself,children and wives,
first
whats worse is there's no time to call the experts
so da butchers jumpen in this shit for what its worth
which line should i cut first, red or black
and whats this yellow one,
1 wrong move and we're all gone
step back to analyze the situation
i cant get the damn ticken out my head, im running out of patience
2 minutes left, people getting stuck in the staircase
someone stuck this bomb up inside a leather briefcase
i gotta crack the code like davinci
is this a dream, or a joke, somebody pinch me
reality hit me when i saw the sticks of dynomite
if i pull them off it sets the trigger for them to ignite
somebody get me some scissors, im gonna cut this line
if i get it wrong every mother fucker's gonna die
i close my eyes and i start cutten
this shit is still ticken, damnit that didnt do nothin
there about 100 wires and i only got a minute left
but im still cool, i yell, somebody get me a cigarette
i light it up, damn it i had enough
i gotta find the one that will save us from blowing up
all of a sudden i remembered something i saw on the discrovery
channel about how to dismantel a bomb, from a to z
watching tv high got u watching some stupid shit,
never in my life did i think id have to use it
but now all of a sudden i held the key to the mystery
i hold the answer to saving everyone's mysory
i cut the red and yellow one and the ticken finally stopped
my heart nearly stopped but i ended up on top
the mayor gave me the key to the city
taken pictures holden babies, all the ladies kissen me
even got interviewed on larry king live
im the butcher flyen back to the killer be hive

Jesus Christ this peice was disgusting....im sorry man but back to the drawing board....like seriously......drastically.........

peace

[TUCO]

damn....dude....u seriously need some lessons.....im about to throw up

peace

[GuardianOne]

no homo

Iam sure sure what you mean, maybe you can enlighten us on you thesis? Since you know everything?

Peace

[hollywoodrealty]

rzarectah93, u are a hater, u are like a 14 year old girl the way u yap on these threads but never drop a rhyme, if u got some shit to say to me lets go on the battlefield, i will crush you like a pinata, i could care less about your comments

[hollywoodrealty]

rzarectah93, u are a hater, u are like a 14 year old girl the way u yap on these threads but never drop a rhyme, if u got some shit to say to me lets go on the battlefield, i will crush you like a pinata, i could care less about your comments

[GuardianOne]

You hav a nack at expressing thing well. The whole verse flowed well, considering that it was very story like. But the way you put it makes it hard to grasp the intensity of the lyrics (or situation) might need to work on the content there. But it was a good verse.

Peace
PS: Good read

[Jabba Jaw]

the vesre started off ok

the flow was choppy at times
creative topic to write about
it fell off a lil towards the end but i can see potential in there
juss keep at it homie

[hollywoodrealty]

guardianone, i read through the comments taht u make, and u are one of the few people who keep it real, u tell people whats good whats bad, thanks for the comments, and 83 raw, thanks for being str8 forward, there is defenently some work needed, peace to u all

[TUCO]

LMAO
all of guardians comments/feedback come out positive.....ALL of em....regardless who's peice it is....hahahahhahahahha
u gotta learn to accept constructive criticism dude.....i hated ur peice....simple as that
and u mentione battlefield??? please.....like i wanna waste my time and drop lyrics on this site, lol

peace