anyone else got any comments for me, peace
anyone else got any comments for me, peace
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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That was heavy favorite lines were
See volcanoes explode, reload my mental presence
feeling obscurity chemicals changing our anatomy
Well thought out darts peace.
My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
Hell razah
Nice verse and well placed also, you thoughts on this verse seem to be drifting not aimlessly. Cause you go through a certain area in the verse then come back to whats really happening in this world, quite impressive (some people just take different pieces and parts and join the verse) you sought of walked through it (like the motions) well controlled. Some parts though you seemed to be kind of lost in thought (not literally but in knowledge, asking questions making it try to make sense)nice verse
Peace
thanks james and gaurdian for your insight, ya i was trying my hardest to stay on topic and just speak about some ill shit, hopefully i can drop some more quality like this, peace
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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anyone else got some input?
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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hunted or hunter, predetor, or pray
the cycle of life, how'd we make it all this way
a psycho of the night plays an angel in the day
nigga's get the dracula bite, then they gotta avoid the sun's rays
when the heavyweights start swingen and your just a featherweight
i start swingen till u see a white light, open heavons gates
if you dont know how it goes, let me demonstrate
its like desecrating the words of the bible before its time to meet your fate
if u cant wait and have no patience in a snake pit
trust me, you'll get killed when the 1st snake bit
physically im out numbered but mentally im ahead
gotta think quick or your ship sinks, you're dead
dont be misled by the voices in your head, just think
train yourself for the challenges in life, perfect your instinct
bcuz the shit stinks, expect the worst, get the best
im on god's quest to feeling righteousness
im always in accordance with virtue and morality
dont dance with devil's in blue dresses, thats fatality
reality, its virtual, my spirituality is supernatural
vitality is crucial, in actuality its perceptual
you gotta invision your future if u want to leave the past
my invasion of your culture will change it fast
if your ears digest the words, if your eyes reolize
when reading the scriptures of the butcher, there's no surprise
i lay out all the facts, no fiction, just friction
shake the earths grounds, no playen around, its an addiction
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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any feedback?
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=401654
nice verse man but I wish I could hear you actually spit cause sometimes it seems like the words loose their rhythym
its like desecrating the words of the bible before its time to meet your fate
if u cant wait and have no patience in a snake pit
trust me, you'll get killed when the 1st snake bit
these are tight lines but they also seem kinda long-winded but I could see how that might not be the case if I heard you spit'em. Overall though, nice verse and concept.peace
thanks eric, ya im working shit out right now with recording a few songs, so far i got 4 done, but im trying to perfect shit, and sometimes i might overstuff a line so usually i edit the songs when it comes time to spit it, but usually everything works out just fine, when i got my shit on point ill drop some audio, peace
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fuck the rags, im bout the riches
if the hoe is on the rag im fucken other bitches
im not one to brag or burn bridges but my rap style is privelaged
small time mc's i call them rap midgets
i got magic like johnson, kick shit like charles bronson
and i always spit shit daily like carson
this is arson, cuz im burning the track
this is war son, there's no turning back
im warning u that when u see me covered in blood
you better run for cover before i nip it in the bud
my bombs are never duds, filled to the rim with gunpowder
you never seen it coming just like a sunshower
i got the power, lighting strikes when the beef ignites
deep insight, i creep at night, in the shadows of fright
im on a flight, a one way ticket to the sickest
site you ever seen, its not a dream, its really tempest
its not even a nightmare, this hell is my reality
nigga's dont fight fair, that why i cast a spell that brings casualties
in actuality, the death rate is on a rapid increase
when the butcher swings his knife, mc's deceased, rest in peace
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww
Hollywood kiling it!!!!!
Yo, hollywood your game has stepped up so much over the last few months!!! Fuck man you coming through tight!!!
Hot rhyme bro.
Peace.....
Bring it ek se!!!
thanks for the comments dupreez, u always come through, and vern, thanks too, and i like the new name, the shit fits you, vernakula is ill, peace, and any other comments?
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only droppen hits
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i came to play thats why im sporten the jordans
when i step on the court, you'll feel the explosion
witness the erosion of your defense
my quickness and swiftness throws you off sequance
i pledge allegiance to this rap game
its contagious once u get a taste of the fame
why waste the chance to advance in society
the thoughts of albert einstein hide inside of me
when i invented the style that got cemented
under the pavement, 2000 years later its still sacred
i turn theives into dabree when i pop them
cant run from ghost and goblims cuz somebody's gotta stop em
the problem with getting past your fears is
when u think u defeated them but suddenly they reappear, its
the way shits gonna be just leave it alone
ill put u in the past now its time to move on
but your holding on for your dear life
got you all stressed out like a zebra loosing its stripes
whats all the hype about, its time for me to kill the noise
shoot out your eardrums so u got no choice
this is my kingdom, im the one wearing the crown
i got my dog pound like the cleveland browns
bunch of doverman pinchers, bulldogs, and rot wielers
and when they all attack there's no survivors
nothing but leftovers for the vulchers
evolution of man, im changing the culture
im the butcher, my rhymes are toxic
spit flames, swing switch blades when i talk sick
your like the walking dead, a zombee
i gotta eat, i aint ghandi, your hoes all on my salami
the butcher got the freshest meats, the freshest rhymes, the freshest beats
so take a number and have a seat
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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