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[Father N Dangerous]

Thank you very much i tryed giving ya rep, but i have to wait

any comments on my verses is greatly appreciated

I also respect that you red more then one. good lookin

[JackOfHearts]

i wanna giv ppl rep but i dunno how 2 lol??

[Father N Dangerous]

haha ok well i'll tell ya

its on the top right of peoples post's in threads, the two little yellow buttons on the top right its the one on the left.

[JackOfHearts]

sorted, cheers

[Luther Large]

Still my STyle's Ancient, Filled with Vile Hatred
watch as i ShapeShift to a Plantiff with Patience's
to a Patient thats Wait'n for Examination cuz he's Plain SicC
Tainted Franchise's can't Analyze-This, And-My-Spits..
Energize's Enterprizes as ya Enter-My-Domain
Flow Un-Contained, call me Ron-Dayne the Way i'm Runnin'-The-Game
castin Tundra's-n-Hurricane's, and Ton's of Furious Rain
Pure-Spits-Pierce'n-Terrain, Mirror'd-Image-Fierce-n-unable-ta-Restrain
leave ya Numb like I Pumped ya Vein's-with-Novacaine
I'm the Flyest-Miracle, makin it so no one Crys-at-ya-Burial
end ya Demise-"Very-Slow", I stay high like a "Ferris-Wheel"
I Will Kill all ya Daphodile's, Grab-da-Steel and Blast-Untill
your Ass-is-Seal'd in da Bodybag unda a Landfill

Give-Hope-With-Words Slit ya Wrists-for-Provok'n-Nerd
Hit-da-Spliff cuz WnD's SMOKIN-HERB'S!!!

the whole thing is nice and the the 1st 2 lines were dope as hell
i really like how it sounded in my head when reading it

the only thing i have to critic is the part where you say "ron dayne"
it's a good meta4........but ron dayne aint that great and people could take it the wrong way

but overall it was a really nice verse


peace...........

[Father N Dangerous]

Word now thats wats up!!!! u got my respect Luther thanks for taking your time to read.

Rep'd

[Father N Dangerous]

BigBen WnD

Paint the Town Red ( with bigben)

Automatic Gats with Clips, the only outcome is a Tragic Accident
Again me n the Same Head Destroy our Foes, got the whole town watered Down like Toilet Bowls
Unfold the Scroll, so we can Uphold the Old ways but new Path's to Roads are Known to Fast Erode
So Max. exposure was only Masked by Soliders, Strapped with Gats Mac's and Holisters
We Ran Plans like Sculptures, and ate from the desserts Land like Vultures


The Passive get blasted, sanded down and branded,
I hold my own! like I carry a cannon, intelligent mind,
fuck the dumb, deaf, and blind, Governed obsolete design,
the new molds and outlines, manipulates the viewing mind,
the cattle are primed ! chew on cud and trample thru the mud,
ethics become smudged, family values are lost, children become thugs,
wheres the love? todays teenagers hug they guns trading poison for Funds,
fertile soil is Gummed, thoughts on elevating come undone...
pictures of past....
I strangle the wicked with Love,
show compassion always ready for action,
brothers be lackin, with movements backtrackin,
spinning they wheels no grip lack of traction,
subtract ya action, butterfly affect muscle's contract,
Penetrating Paint brush.. visual collapse Crushed,
heart attack bloodrush this art is fact,an artifact,
spraycan fat nozzle effect,
these murals of life painted in hues of red,


Me and BigBen we Stoled Grands, killed all the Kings Men then.. Foes Ran
And things can only get Worse, We stepped inside a Vacant Church
our Aim ta Rape the Earth, so we Came with Grenades that Burst
and a Flame Thrower, to Celebrate the almighty Satans Birth
while the pastor reads, those Fake Script Words..
we Erase ya Curb with Effective Well Placed Urns, we gonna win cuz we Takein Turns
So ya know we were Packin Heat, While we were Servin a Blast for Each
Causein Complete Catastrophe, But this time with more Casualties
and Rancid Screams, while loadin those Gats with Beamz..
to fully Detach ya Seamz,


bram stoker addicts and vultures,
scavanging squadrons of soldiers,
danger and ben paint the town red!!...
the culture poacher ratchets spit n strike Jags, Leapords & Cobras,
Urban Taxidermist trophy toter,
closet holdin' endangered coats,
the Heat smolders it's hotter than Vegas,
I'm warnin' Dangerous, bring the Red Sharpie,
shit is boisterous ! Purple Velvet Plush,
remove the vein roll up the Dutch,
Slow with the clutch never automatic
laziness creates tragic habits causin' unwanted Panic...
next day you read innocent bystanderd's branded,
No!! hell nah!! we're not having it!
motivate the motor rate chess moves paint the Town Burgundy,
swollen noses Bleed from make-up wearing clowns,
the tainted terrain towns ebb,
Our flow is sleds! among these snowflake icicle heads,
blue faced bastards turn brick red,
brush strokes maroon the dead,
cluttered city canvas we Paint the Town Red!!


Were quick ta get da Biscut, then go click click with the Trigg if theres Conflictions...
leave'n the rich kids no longer livin in sin, but in da cement.....
we got the lead for more bloodshed, and the infa red for more instant deaths..
dim wits is deminished text like imprints on a Infants head,
then if ya don't listen were casuin inflicts in ya skin flesh
Cuz Dangerous with BigBen is the Opposite of Painless..
we quick to shoplift with da Stainless, ya best Option is to Lay Stiff
cuz if the Glock Spits and its Aim Hits, you gonna be six feet deep...
but not with the people you Came With, instead you'll be rottin in the Pavement
Cuz me and BigBen High, Glide when we Smite the Unkind
Usually come out when the Sunrise, for ending peoples Dumb Lives
thats Intertwined and Combined, with ill spits and Blood Lines
cuz i've created whole Mountains, while i Re-arrange the TownsMen
ta get used as we please cuz we Paint the Town Red

[Eversick666]

YO,mega nice colab wit BIG B,fuck, readin this all blazed,you two got madd flava keep up the RAW shit son,hit me back

eversick666

[Father N Dangerous]

yo thanks eversick your opinon is greatly respected

[Mr:Merrick]

tight shit yo, keep it up

[Father N Dangerous]

thanks for your insight...

[Mr:Merrick]

im walking thru the shadows of my past//
gotta think fast, hard to live lika an outcast//
my heart is pounding so hard that it hurts//
my hands are shakin and i feel like my head is about to burst//
empty shells of lost souls like an echo of silence//
streets filled corpses and cops that use violence//
my brain is racin and I´m soced in sweth//
my world is fadeing now I´m close to death//
i close my eyes as i drag my last breath//
but i wont give up untill my soule gets blessed.

[Father N Dangerous]

Well consider me a Pastor, for my mic Blessed ya Trash Verse

Mr. Merrick i said make your own thread, don't post it mine

[Mr:Merrick]

sorry dude

[Father N Dangerous]

no problem dood