just bumpin my thread prolly gonna drop soon
just bumpin my thread prolly gonna drop soon
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
My Eye is in the Scope
My Eye is in the Scope, as I Snipe from High Window's, turning my Foes Wives ta Widow's
Opponets Size is Little like Minnow's, my Ink Flow Tip-Toes ta Give Those that Appose defeat Syndrome
Like a Execution, my Text is Electrocution, Un-Seen cuz i fucked up ya computer Screen'z Resolution
holding more Green then the Western Union, I'm the Best with Text and i'll Prove It
Cuz ya'll fall off more then Acorn's, while i stay on the grind like Skateboards!!
as my Rage Takes Form, Tossin Claymores Galore that Came For Pain n Gore like HailStorms!!
so wat you Expected? my Pen Flicks Edge Tip let's of Agression puttin me in a Stupendous Suspension
Respected like a Lieutenant, ATTENTION me and my Friends Hit HARD like an Erection!!!
no Exceptions i'm the closest thing to a Fugitive, Immune ta Trick'z, try'n ta Ruin my Shit
so know the only time you "CROSS my path" is ya Ass on the Crucifix!!
Causing much Dis-Honor ta my ForeFathers no Longer the young GrassHopper
War-Monger not knowin life's ClockWork, a Martyr that Partnered with a Monster
i Depart with my Revolver, only ta Acquire an Attire that Fire's SideWinders the size of IceBergs
my Tight Words kill Entire Empires thats Guarnteed to get you layed out like a Recliner!!
while my Adviser's Admire My Work, cuz it'z not leaveing a single Survivor!!
Last edited by Father N Dangerous; 08-25-2006 at 04:29 PM.
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
uppin this...
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
dope verse!
these lines really stood out 2 me
Cuz ya'll fall off more then Acorn's, while i stay on the grind like Skateboards!!
as my Rage Takes Form, Tossin Claymores Galore that Came For Pain n Gore like HailStorms
so wat you Expected? my Pen Flicks Edge Tip let's of Agression puttin me in a Stupendous Suspension
Respected like a Lieutenant, ATTENTION me and my Friends Hit HARD like an Erection!!!
peace
Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits
tremendous, ultra-violet shine blind forensics
-Inspectah Deck
word now thats wats up!! propz to u sirkulayshun!!!
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
bump
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
bump yet again
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
yah,those are some true lines dude madd props..
get at me tho
peace
eversick666
this post is levels above your previous ones in my opinion. you are becoming alot more skilled at portraying deeper meanings in a fluid manner.
" i Depart with my Revolver, only ta Acquire an Attire that Fire's SideWinders the size of IceBergs
my Tight Words kill Entire Empires thats Guarnteed to get you layed out like a Recliner!!"
word thanks andrem for giving me your in sight in my thread. i shall proceed
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
better than me fo sho!
nice lines dawg
off topic: do i have to make my own verse thread to get some feedback? someone better skim through my verses and tell me where the hell i'm goin wrong. Any opinion is welcomed. Remember: I am Romanian! so if i suck, i suck, but for a Romanian guy i guess i'm hangin on pretty good.
holla at me! peace
word thanks homie, and yeah make ur own thread haha
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
ur getting better but poetry man work on ya rhyme schemes
u wanna spar? in this thread?
haha ight u start
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
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