ERIC UNSEEN vs THE GOD CONCEPT (Eric Unseen WINS)

[Visionz]

1 round duel to the death-5 votes to win it.peace

[Visionz]

Ur not heavenly, your god's concept of of dog shit/i spit to get ur wig split like a cleft lip/my rhymes is not of this world like a chick with a third tit/years later you'll 'recall' your 'total' downfall/cold like the Russian winter that murdered 'em all/This rap nazi couldn't stop me/my mentals click like papparatzi/ I pubish pictures in scriptures that'll change your concept when they hit ya/Sportin x-tra large but the shirt don't fit/maybe you should realize what size to fuck wif/You're in Big & tall but you bring a little man's frame/dunkin on a 6-foot-hoop cause you got a little man's game/ I won't stoop to your level of those landlocked amatuer flows/I'll leave you wide open like the view from the Pocanos/Then I'll slit ur throat and leave you to swim with the sharks/The only shit ur droppin is going straight to the ocean's dark/I'm the silent assassin, I never leave a mark or any remains/Just like your life's work after your soul's decontained/ Bury you with two quarters cause you're eternally chump change/

[tha god concept]

ayo i saw eric.....now i no why he wants to be unseen
he looks like a fuckin anerexic alien from tatooine.... not a human being
always staring at his computer screen.....hoping he'll get noticed
i ghost write for this punk i hope that all yall no this

erics about to get served like a fuckin supena
aka imma blowem away like my name was katrina
me against hims like crazy leggs vs a balerina
nigga I AM HIPHOP your just a public speaka

tha god concept dont accept nonsense kid my style is riddiculous
imma make you feel my presents like blind children on christmas
nigga your on my hit list...u better be cautious
my rhymes will surround and stomp you like you was a midget in a mosh pit

my rhymes can be deadly so read the hazzards when i battle rap
juss one look at my verse can give my apponent a fatal heart attack
or make they fuckin skull crack....cause they brains swell up
my linguistics are sadistik feel the pain sho nuff

erics rhymes are weak like snitching on sumone you love
my rhymes are tight like OJ's famous leather glove
its like they were touched from sumone heavinly up above....the way theyre distinguished
i turn punks like eric into sum gimp kids...so maybe they have a shot at winning the rap SPECIAL OLYMPICS

[tha god concept]

nyce battle homie


votes...

[Visionz]

nice battle man, it's cool how we have contrasting styles that are both tight

[Robert]

dope battle guys it was hard to call who won but I think Eric got it.
The God Concept:
flow-7/10, Good flow.
wordplay-7/10, alright wordplay.
creativity-8/10.
vocabulary-6/10, Alright.
punches-9/10, Dope Punches, A little better then Eric.

Eric Unseen-
flow- 8/10Liked the way your verse flowed homie.
wordplay-8/10, good multi's and rhyme scheme.
creativity-8/10.
vocabulary-6/10, about the same as the god.
punches-8/10.

Overall, cocept=74%, Eric=76%
Dope battle guys, you to are closely matched thats for sure,
vote=Eric
peace to both emcees.

[Visionz]

thanks for postin ya vote man, peace

[deuce Lo]

my rhymes are tight like OJ's famous leather glove-the god concept

thats a sick verse, over all amazing battle to the both of ya, but i liked concepts style and flow better, and creative punches

vote goes to the god concept

[RockD]

The God Concept:
flow-3.5/5, Good flow.
wordplay-3/5, average wordplay.
creativity-4/5.
vocabulary-2/5, Alright.
punches-5/5, Nice punshes

Eric Unseen-
flow- 4/5 very nice flow
wordplay-5/5, rhyme scheme was ill.
creativity-4.5/5. blows minds wit creativity
vocabulary-3/5, average
punches-4/5 the obly place where u lost lol

Overall, cocept=17.5, Eric=20.5
the punches were nice on concepts cona but eric overal illness lol
vote=Eric

[Visionz]

2-0, thanks for postin the vote.peace

[TeknicelStylez]

The God Concept:
flow- 6.5/10 I noticed some bar stretching
wordplay- 7.5/10 not bad
Creativity- 7/10 kind of unoriginal
vocabulary- 6/10 no really noticable vocabulary here
punches- 8.5/10 you came with alot of punches but I can't give you 10 cuz they weren't that good...

Overall = 71%

Eric Unseen-
flow- 7/10 Decent Flow
wordplay- 9/10 you had some hot wordplay

my rhymes is not of this world like a chick with a third tit/years later you'll 'recall' your 'total' downfall/

thats gonna go over alot of peoples heads.

creativity- 9/10 alot of rarely used stuff in here
vocabulary- 8.5/10 use of strong multi syllable words
punches- 7/10 were you was lacking not too many punches

Overall = 81%

PEACE



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[Visionz]

3-0, guess that's a tko, glad you caught that one Tek, good to know it's not gonna go over everyones head. peace and respect to everyone who posted a vote

[tha god concept]

yo i had a vote on here earlier 2day......where is it now??

and arent battles all about punchlines????????

if so........

anyway good battle eric im not hatin juss statin

[tha god concept]

im juss sayin this 4 all the next battles that are comin up

why is vocab and werdplay bein judged in battles honestly???

battles are spose to be raw and 2 the point with punches.

not like a witty story with good werdplay.

im juss sayin its not how u judge a battle

[Visionz]

it helps me out so I'm not complainin', lol.....you def threw the harder punches in our verses but I gotta say its about the total package, nawmean.....it was a nice battle regardless.peace