Manic Lotus 1000 Tongue Technique (official thread)

[manic lotus]

yo you can't touch me, i'll belittle ur skills//
i'm blazin dutchies, you poppin skittles for thrills//
i come with an acquittal that kills, fuck the bills//
make my own cizzle wit benjamin franklin mills//
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the reverberation of my vocal leaves ya speachless//
frustrate the nation with hip hop leeches//
while ur cravin a vacation with your history teacher//
im maintainin status, with squeaky clean sneakers//
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attempts to decode mathmatics unsuccessful//
u tryin to decypher pie in just one breathful//
its stressfull, comprehendin your mouth above your mind//
step back, plan attack, take time, then decide//
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your prehistoric kid, and i'm colinizin outer space//
my psionic powers expand like a superhuman race//
towers and cables connect the spectacle that takes place//
and when I cock back both tonsils, victory is what i taste//


yo whatsup, hopefully this one's a little easier to digest. quick piece. feed me, semoure!

[Sirkulayshun]

nice verse....not bad at all...the flow was good and the structure was nice...n it had a good vocab also
keep it up

[manic lotus]

Swordsman straight fast wit knives//
slashin and swingin till they gash ya sides//
its a fact of life, if you don't posess the talent~
don't smash wit knights, we retract ya rights//
wit frag grenades that crack ya frame//
one made tried to dash away so i flashed his brains~
wit a dash of blades -- I'm not//
concerned wit guns, rather earn my fun~
wit tips of swords, cliques get gourged//
the mic gets split in fours, why ya swipin ya faith?~
you can't hit a lord.


threw some shit up to get a mL thread started. more to come.

[manic lotus]

yo i turn text to physical like epsons and lexmarks//
my verbs never cynical, hold wieght like x marks//
always carry h2o, shoot sparks when i flex hard//
catch A's on the draw cause I magnitize the best card//
got dudes fiendin for start buttons - rhymes stuck on pause//
im inventin whole languages - you googlin a new clause//
frugal dudes flappin jaws - yo they green and it shows~
yall temple of darts janitors, I'm the C.E.O//
gastro flow prone to master foes wit microphones~
vascular tones honed my shits fit like tai-bo~
slow - to light speed, I fluctuate - take heed//
biblical mysteries - decodin codes like the da vinci//
leave bold dudes askin 'how'? wit hip hop epiphanies//

peace.

[manic lotus]

yo thanks for the feed spoken. bump bump. ^_^

[andrem]

definitely an improvement. u got skills. try some different content next time.
keep postin

[Father N Dangerous]

definitely an improvement. u got skills. try some different content next time.
keep postin

co sign that shit, strop trying to sound smarter then einstein cuz if you can't make it flow smoothly and its choppy then it kills ya wordplay. so keep workin at it. but i'll admit ya getitnt here

[manic lotus]

thanks for the feed. and i am smarter than einstien. ^_+

[manic lotus]

yo flex n boast wit a thousand posts -
i got dudes makin toasts to my prose -
battlin you on your grounds, i'm the host -
no cocktails though yo this shit is a roast -
you fuckin froze, comatose, no comprehendin -
bendin linguistic physics when i rip shit exquisite -
listen - im manic lotus, you a pidgeon - call me /
translate this battle in statistical figures - all me /
yo i'll battle you with no vocal cords -
the god concept? shit you just a hopefull lord -
i gourge throats n throw flows off balance -
ya talents easy like buyin milk in gallons -
verbal talons rip ya flesh, makin, concept salad -
im bumpin ill shit, you singin balads, saddened -

[tha god concept]

yo kid i dead herbs like you for practice in these sessions
manic lotus?? more like manic depression
my mouths a smiff n wessun so dont come testin
plus ya whole styles fulla shit like ya lower intestins
i should STRAIGHT up bitch slap you for bein a FAGGOT
then murk you so ya change ya name to Manic Maggot
no more Lotus when ya fuckin throatless
you wont even need to use ya vocal chords cause your rhyme was hopeless
im fuckin dope like coke is
your juss watered down diet pepsi bitch
im a fuckin kill you over nothin like im joe peci in a mob flick
i spit the pure rawness your shits juss wack to be honest
so go back and practice cause this victorys flawless

[Eversick666]

DAMN,pullen the jigsaw on his ass.
shouldent have steped to the god son.

[manic lotus]

lmfao.. yo this herb canadian odb cliche lines cause ya been doin it in one place so long shit is fuckin funny, god. keep that shit up.. prolly a little fat ginger kid.

[manic lotus]

yo you lookin for stories? I'll narrate em --
yo you lookin for gory? I'll serrate em --
irrigate plains wit bloodstains from long range //
spill brains wit rage, yo i gotta get paid //
my roads paved an laid, yo i can't be upstaged //
and if you playin me first, you betta up my pay //

cause im just chillin tokin dope-dro
wit my spokes-low - putcha in a choke-hold -
listen to my folk-low //

me and the fisherman sittin where you wish you was been //
while you chillin wit some skittles n ya husbands cuzin //
banned in little philly cause my busts be cussin //
get vulgar when i pounce, you ain't fuckin tough kid //

yo peace.