i appreciate it... my syllable counts are perfect every time... it's important... thanks for the feedback...
PEACE
PSY
i appreciate it... my syllable counts are perfect every time... it's important... thanks for the feedback...
PEACE
PSY
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
i like how u can rhyme a line then approach the next line at a different angle...like change the subject...not quite tho,change the scene, i unno what u call it......you prolly know what i mean,.....you got alotta skill and freshness, peace
"BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"
i appreciate the feedback... i like to switch it up constantly... i just like to touch on as much as i can in one verse...
PEACE
PSY
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
Most people don't rhyme half as well as they think they do... infact, a lot of them don't rhyme at all
thats my rules, unlimited,no rules, u dont even gotta rhyme
"BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"
LOL, well then we operate under opposite rules... i prefer shit that rhymes... i think you gotta be twice as ill if you don't rhyme... a lot of poets can pull that off, but few rappers can...
PEACE
PSY
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
uppin'...
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
Yo Psy,
Check It, How You Gonna Cause All This Uproar And Shit And Youve Only Posted One Verse So Far?
his been here long then i have....that meaning...way b4 the corp even crashed if i rememebr correctly....
check his join date suckas
Yeah, anybody who's been around for a while has seen many of Psy's verses...
As usual, you slayed 'em once again. Nobody writes more meticulously crafted verses... period. Signed/unsigned, underground/overground, fat/skinny... nobody.
Psy, do you have audio anywhere? I remember you talking about getting in the studio at some point. What came of that? Sorry if I missed something...
Peace.
Free from the mold, breaking the distance/
A cause to face fears fraught with aching persistence...
-Arcane
http://arcanum.dmusic.com
PEACE arcane... i appreciated it... i've fucked around in a firend's studio a couple times, but i'm not into recordin' right now... i'm gettin' published, and i'm happy with that for now... i plan on doin' live performances at a 'Slam' stage they're buildin' downtown.... if they ever finish it, that is...
and to Onpoint, i've been around since this whole website was still called 5 elements back in 1999, 2000... nex, and i been around longer than any of you... i'll drop a classic verse tonight, so yall newjacks can see more of my shit...
PEACE
PSY
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
~LOST SOULS~
pour mistaken mixtures of aggression; lyrics engraved by a pigeon, we’re paintin’ pictures of depression
your forsaken figures of deception; spirit’s enslaved by religion, the blatant scriptures of oppressiondamn soldiers killed tomorrow’s fame; a soulless man of knowledge stands over guilt and sorrow’s shameland owners built and borrowed gains; and now there’s petty thugs who scam over lil’ figaro chainsso any wealth has felt flagrant, but shown only through standard eyes, and for my health as well sacredi remain stealth in hell’s matrix, but known only to damn her skies, ‘cause all i’ve dealt is self-hatredand we played in this drama/mystery, though a new recital revivalist’s seen feignin’ our trauma historywe’re reclaimin’ this contra victory, though we’re suicidal survivalists, remain’ in contradictoryrisk it, eyein’ crypts to the fullest; quick, tally who’s left, in fox holes, buggin’ on a mission to pull itwitness, i envision the dullest; in valleys of death, it’s lost souls, duckin’ from ignition of bulletsthe earth starts spinnin’ backwards; the guns are blatant, my lungs are vacant, so i’d ‘ve never existedfrom birth, start givin’ passwords; the sun awakened the son of satan, so i’m forever inflictedyou’re weavin’ a dream of weaker incompetence, believin’ the schemes of speaker’s anonymousthe demons take heed to leaders of dominance, and leads to an even bleaker apocalypseso we fight mercs and venomous snakes; who’s bluffin’; consume dumb and indigenous fakesa trife birth of sinister traits; some goons toughen in new london, the winter awaitsand spite earth with splinters of fate; tomb’s bludgeoned in doomed dungeons, a minister breaksour life hurts, administer hate; it proves nothin’ to lose loved ones, our biggest mistake’s:watchin’ god’s plans fade to pieces; i’m a wolf in sheep’s clothin’, watchin’ lambs pray to jesusnow your fan base decreases; and i mangled death’s angels, with it’s man-made diseasesyou phonies believin’ in jesus of nazareth; concieve it, know we decievin’ your thesis, it’s blasphemousyou lonley cretins is bleedin’, it’s hazardous; believe it, only demons is breathin’ in lazaruslight his ritual candle; the time is ours, their warrior’s wrath has cruelly expired, your highness cowersfight political scandal; our finest hour, our glorious paths have trully inspired the higher powersi’m where it chooses to rhyme; and though it’s dark, embrace the poem, it’s there to loosen the blindsi swear i’m losin’ my mind; and though my heart’s encased in stone, i swear it bruises at timesso i’ma write till my poems lift; sippin’ this ether, i don’t give a shit neither; i’ma fight till my bones splitso in spite of his own gifts; liftin’ his cleaver, gettin’ sick as a fever, he’ll go slice in his own wristswatch me bleed from a severed end, and write with every scolded emotion i heave from this feather penbelieve what i leave in this letter sends: nick, i just wanna say i’m sorry for not bein’ a better friendand as i listen to this sony slowly slashin’ my vein, the stories that they told me slowly pass in my brainso whatever remains holy’s solely acid in rain, ‘cause knowin’ you died lonely only adds to the pain
Copyright © 2003 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist
Those who have something to fall back on, always do.
iight, you nice and all I gotta give you that, your storytellin is well structured- I wouldnt say you come across as a Certified Asshole in your verse though. You do got some honest opinions and that takes some real vision.
PEACE
Its a touching verse, seems to have a bit of emotion, whilst kept that main point toward the title. But gave of a lot of self thought toward the reader. Though involved other areas of thought (you kind of grasped much which could relate to this topic, and incorporated it into the verse).
Peace
PS: Keep posting
always indepth pieces you post psykosus
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