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    Default silent.sin's sanctuary

    dropping freeverses in here.

    just typed it up.

    The Titans Clash, my adversaries heart Inside my Grasp
    Reciting Raps to the sounds of the beat...a Final Tap
    before it Fades into Silence, Roaring to Wake up a Riot
    My Ancient Alliance arrives, now there's no Safety reminders
    Mindstate of a highness, brainwaves containing a virus
    it's like i've contaminated my Iris with Aids that's Laying inside it
    Flash backs are torture chamber scenes, no soaring Angel wings
    painful screams, where death is the final resort to Pain Relief
    all The Madness in this vision, is something i can Hardly say
    The Spanish inquisition starts looking like a holiday
    Parting ways with my sane self, deranged, i think my brain melts
    at the thought of all the pain dealt, it's strange how i don't crave help
    Raised hell as a former son, added Light to my empire
    Damien may begin with his dynasty of fire
    where we Hire demons to Heighten Evil with Rifles to abuse
    Entire regions start dying, people ignited from the fumes

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    THIS was raw as hell! The imagery...the stuttering flow....big ups, yes sir.
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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    Quote Originally Posted by sileNt.siN. View Post
    dropping freeverses in here.

    just typed it up.

    The Titans Clash, my adversaries heart Inside my Grasp
    Reciting Raps to the sounds of the beat...a Final Tap
    before it Fades into Silence, Roaring to Wake up a Riot
    My Ancient Alliance arrives, now there's no Safety reminders
    Mindstate of a highness, brainwaves containing a virus
    it's like i've contaminated my Iris with Aids that's Laying inside it
    Flash backs are torture chamber scenes, no soaring Angel wings
    painful screams, where death is the final resort to Pain Relief
    all The Madness in this vision, is something i can Hardly say
    The Spanish inquisition starts looking like a holiday
    Parting ways with my sane self, deranged, i think my brain melts
    at the thought of all the pain dealt, it's strange how i don't crave help
    Raised hell as a former son, added Light to my empire
    Damien may begin with his dynasty of fire
    where we Hire demons to Heighten Evil with Rifles to abuse
    Entire regions start dying, people ignited from the fumes

    sup andrew!!??? this piece is nice call me dawg we need to freestyle been too long :0 ain't got any min's so call me afta 9 my tyme!!


    anyway..

    this piece was ill son, flow was on point, vocab was extraordinary, structure was very well put together, and imagery well
    My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
    More fly then everybody that wields luggage
    Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it

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    yeah, deadly ass verses for real...the images are crisp and flow is flawless
    "Fuck fame... I'll shoot a hole in a 50 cent piece to test my aim." - Masta Killah (One Blood)

    "Kiss the pyramid...experiment wit high explosives. I slap box wit Jesus....lick shots at Joseph." - GFK (Daytona 500)

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    thank you all for the feedback. very much appreciated.

    about to drop another one.

    eyo

    I carve my Initials into your corpse, leave the Watermark behind
    so the evidence is evident, the Cops are All adviced
    The way i karate chop a guy, till there body's not in line
    have 'em looking like pastrami with salami on the side
    I'm not a wicked menace, I'm a Calm n Honest Guy
    With a back pack full of gas traps when i'm Locked up on a crime
    You see, i usually do Not apologize
    But i'm sorry for your loss, see, your Daughter crossed the line
    Jack the Ripper mentality, with Chickens and emcees
    See, you bitches become a victim of the killings for a fee
    I grow titanium claws, when a bitch is fetishing
    so i stick my finger deep inside the hole, like a wedding ring
    Everything around me, made me what I Am Now
    They thought they had it safe, but I'm a Monster in a Glass House
    It only takes the scent of blood for Me to go and Lash Out
    All hope for humanity has "Left" like the "last house"

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    ya iLL shit old friend! if this is who i think it is

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    kingshyt! holy shit. how the fuck are you man
    you've been ghost for a minute
    whats been up.

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    haaa, i knew that was you!.. long time homie
    jus been chillin tho man.. takin care of my fam 'n shit
    finally got off paper so i been layin low
    good to see ya around tho,, ill try 'n put some
    drops in here for old times .. peace
    Last edited by ArcherPriest; 06-04-2010 at 07:25 PM.

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    friends or enemies ahead of me? i need no distintion
    eventually all destinies will lead to extinction
    reaching total depletion, belittled civil liberties
    skud missile deliveries from ships at middle sea
    target areas, harriers, departing from harbor carriers
    breaching the border barriers of former sumeria
    moral hysteria, spreadin rapid savvy propaganda
    spotted by chopper cameras, locked 'n read mirandas
    the department of corrections have lessons administered
    while they're testin their infected injections on prisoners
    they're subjected to immoral suggestions of ministers
    when the data gets collected detectives will finish work
    crack a guinness first, before attacking random locations
    the men will stratigize a plan with an outstandin ovation
    yellin' get ya fuckin hands up! like your flashin quotations
    if i wuznt cuffed id stick this fuck like plasma donations
    it's a twisted regime.. coded encrypted machine
    if you doubt it you'll be surrounded by enlisted marines
    quick n vicious in schemes, tactics,'highly technical gadgets
    no naked rectacle matches, get taped in medical bandage

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    yeah man. ive been busy with music. i recently got back into this too. haha

    tight verse mayne

    ayo

    Criticize my combatants, and Give them Lectures on Attacking Me
    Jeffrey Dahlmer, teacher giving Lessons from my Faculty
    Somebody call the Medics, cause it's Finna be a Tragic Scene
    the Panicking being televised like a Static screen
    Stupid Bitch, what other type of Girl Are You?
    Act like a Jerk off, and I'll prolly Pearl Harb' You....like World War 2
    I work hard, obscure bars, and insecure small goons
    don't make me laugh, like immature cartoons, beware all crews
    Stampede through the mediterr, Boston crab your Residence
    break silently and Leave Not a Scratch of Evidence
    Are you alive? i'm sorry...i saw your Body Crack to Sediments
    I Forgot this Fag n Left him like his Mom n Daddy's Negligence
    Problematic Gentleman, I politely slide the knife in you
    you wanna blow? fine...I'll shove this dynamite inside of you
    Striking you, make your Entire Life Recyclable
    Years later, this Queer hater gets discovered by a Mining Crew

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    uppppp

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    Beautiful imperfection, An Error from the First Breath
    Concluded into a man that strikes Terror on a Church step
    Verses that Outlast most, through Armageddon black smoke
    when the timeline gap's broke...through an amoeba's backstroke
    Everlasting in a house of pain, Adrenaline Stopped Fueling
    Fixing up my Aggression is what this medicine's Not Doing
    As vital as the rule to Never get Caught Losing
    I'll get your Focus back on track, make the Pendulum stop moving
    Incredible, Not Human, Some observations they notice now
    populations in overcrowd, Got to make it go lower now
    Hire me for the dirty work, Murder verses like day-to-day
    Early birds get their feathers plucked, necks get cut with a razorblade
    you got fire arm? well I'm Equipped with Teflon Sleeves
    Your little wooden crosses have no Effect on me
    End up on the floor like carmen Elektra's jeans
    Elect the king, if not, its you that i Eject off screen

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    Quote Originally Posted by sileNt.siN. View Post
    Beautiful imperfection, An Error from the First Breath
    Concluded into a man that strikes Terror on a Church step
    Verses that Outlast most, through Armageddon black smoke
    when the timeline gap's broke...through an amoeba's backstroke
    Everlasting in a house of pain, Adrenaline Stopped Fueling
    Fixing up my Aggression is what this medicine's Not Doing
    As vital as the rule to Never get Caught Losing
    I'll get your Focus back on track, make the Pendulum stop moving
    Incredible, Not Human, Some observations they notice now
    populations in overcrowd, Got to make it go lower now
    Hire me for the dirty work, Murder verses like day-to-day
    Early birds get their feathers plucked, necks get cut with a razorblade
    you got fire arm? well I'm Equipped with Teflon Sleeves
    Your little wooden crosses have no Effect on me
    End up on the floor like carmen Elektra's jeans
    Elect the king, if not, its you that i Eject off screen
    sick shit the whole thing is flames



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Thanks yo. I've peeped some of your verses in the freestyle thread. nice shit! great structure to ur pieces.

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    verse I just did right now.
    I call it.

    Freestyle Verse I Just Did Right Now take 1:

    boredom strikes, sorta like a butcher knife to your neck
    pushing right through your chest, looking like it is death
    who's this guy? Unknown to many, but flows are heavy
    real talk, one lil' drop concealed wrong done Broke the Levee
    Motion sickness, you'll have to go the distance facin' Spokenn's Writtens
    Broken Pigment, Bones are missin, Dome looks like it's Boa Constricted
    No one can withstand it, I spit classic-al Shit, Fagget
    too Intact, this Impact will in fact leave Ribs cracked in
    Quit Laughin', i'm done hearing you gigglin' herbs
    that have the recognition that you Didn't deserve
    buddy you Need Work, cause when i'm Through witchu
    they'll Put you beneath Dirt like the Brooklyn Zu
    Uncountable acts of Rage, making Fear a disorder
    Line my victims by the age, in Numerical order
    Try putting latches on me, and I'm Snapping 'em Off
    Kids rip you apart cause your Rapping is soft
    and for that, you're getting smacked with a Bat and a Saw
    right in the Back of your Jaw like the Mandible Claw

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