finished a track. "Machine"

[sileNt.siN.]

it's going to be re-done with someone featuring on it.
but just wanted to see what ya'll think of it.
feedback?

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9452647

[sileNt.siN.]

up.

[H.Notik]

first off i'm really feeling the beat...dope sample.

nice quality on this joint...

your flow is smooth through out the song...nice lyrics.

[Ozmosis]

dope beat and ill flow spokenn

[sileNt.siN.]

thanks ya'll. appreciated.
up.

[sileNt.siN.]

arriba.

[cutn' heads]

wow... im not gonna lie, saw the pic on the page passed judgement instantly... that was waayyy wrong. real good work here...

[sileNt.siN.]

haha it's all good. didn't know what to put there, either.
i appreciate you listening to it, after all.

[exxxon]

beat is crazy ill... rhymes werent bad either...keep bangin them joints out..peace

[Sense-A]

I dig the beat.

Your flow is good but lyrics could use some sharpening. lyrics are conceptual though. I liked the first verse more. mic sounds a bit shrill. Maybe run it through a filter?

I'd work on a hook or else enrich the sample during the break. Sounds like a real song in the making.

i'm tired of the routine too my man. to me, my life has been like a bunch of phases. You talk about leaving a piece of you behind. I can relate to that. The sample is sick as someone already mentioned but like i said try to get that vocal sample a little bit louder i want to hear it better.

P.E.A.C.E. Silent Sin

[Tokyo Cigar]

This shit is ill. The beat is fucking INSANE on some wow shit. Dope rhymes too. I like the line "i dont wanna brainstorm i heard the weathers bad" Nuff respect due

[atomicbeats]

sick track... Your flow and lyrics were great. I loved the 2nd verse especially, I thought the flow was tighter, and i Liked the part where you stopped the beat. I agree that a hook would be nice, nothing too complex, just a little something to keep it more interesting. Keep it up, that track has potential