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    under appreciated in society
    yet my LP street-dated and alleviated anxiety
    rap's monotony mandated variety
    I blessed the inebriated with uncontaminated levelz of elevated sobriety
    fulfilled in its entirety,
    the prophecy dropped and abbreviated piety



    animated generosity generated animosity within the populous' vicinity
    the quest for c.r.e.a.m segregated God and man's proximity
    stop the affinity for pop's monopoly and topple all false ministries
    OTB liberates the innocent listener's ear's virginity
    my philosophy grows in apostle-like divinity
    hypocrisy's diminished with a velocity accelerated past infinity
    I demonstrate a symmetry that jostles isosceles Trinities
    your identity gets thrown eternally into anonymity

    instanly return hiphop's dignity just as it waz known in it's days of infancy
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    Nice Verse Otb Respect The Lyrical Thoughts You Putting Down Keep Crushing E'm

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    thanks blastmatic-

    i'm jus tryin to be a O.G. like you fam-

    animated generosity generated animosity...

    yo i gotta big up myself for that one, who else you know ever strung
    those 4 words together-

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    Quote Originally Posted by OTB View Post

    my philosophy grows in apostle-like divinity
    hypocrisy's diminished with a velocity accelerated past infinity
    I demonstrate a symmetry that jostles isosceles Trinities
    your identity gets thrown eternally into anonymity

    instanly return hiphop's dignity just as it waz known in it's days of infancy
    Wow...Thats sharp bro !!!
    The top line is too nice.

    I've been jotting a few darts down bro...
    I'll let you know when it's ready !

    Props

    The W

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    thanks wzawhers

    OTB back up in the spot, i'm great and i got bank
    emcees under attack like whers updates on robot tank

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    Hahaha
    I see what you mean !!
    Rhyming for joke !!!

    "OTB = Only The Best-On The Boards Leaving Emcees Hung By Their Mic Cords"

    Hahaha
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    I had trouble following this man. TBH i reckon you went a little overboard with your vocab and not enough into detail with your topic. The rhyme scheme was nice though, and i did catch some nice imagery. Just tone it down a little for ease of reading i reckon. Still better than most of what i read on rap boards.

    Keep posting.
    Stamping on the testicles of defeat!

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    Nice, but I didn't get this line at all

    "hypocrisy's diminished with a velocity accelerated past infinity"

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