http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=248831
This is solid, gimme some fair criticism
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=248831
This is solid, gimme some fair criticism
i dont like how u chang ur voice when u rap
what do you mean? my inflection?
yea the hook u sound normal but when ur verse hits u change ur voice like ur trying to obtain the hardcore sound like jedi mind tricks or somthing ..u know...i mean hey do what u want..im just saying what i think........
but keep donig ur thing...lets see what others have to say
like I said dude, criticism is what I wanted here, I know you're not hatin on it. you're right too, I do sound too gravely, and it does kinda remind me of what vinnie paz goes for.
Pretty Good!
Work on the delivery some more and you got it.
You can tell who has heart!
My name is DASANE
I make my own beats
I write my own rhymes
Remeber the name DASANE
just relax with your spittin , your goin for the pissed off sound that's aight , but just chill a bit , might be just me but i really wasn't feelin the hook and the beat needs a bigger bassline , the atmosphere is aight for an aggressive tune but i think it could probably use a bit of "juicin" up .
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