....enjoyed this... though obviously written under the influence drugs it was imaginitive... i enjoyed the abstract qualities of the piece... the rhymes, i felt we're kind of lazy but either way, i liked it... the piece flowed pretty well through out.... at times it felt kind of forced... being a former cocaine addict at one point in my life, i can, totally relate to the first two stanzas so well... you described those feelings perfectly... i don't know if i've read any of your work before but this is nice so post again...