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Last edited by Suav; 04-26-2010 at 04:01 PM.
not bad u should make a thread of ur own n keep working at it acutally take tine whth wat u r writeing
My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
More fly then everybody that wields luggage
Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it
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no offence but what the hell was that? lol take 30 min for your next one son...lol i remmber when i use to write like that, i looked at my book of rhymes from 2 years ago and i was like "tha fuck was i smokin? mustve been good shit cuz i use to write like a bitch" lol
"At the party when i move my body, gotta get up and BEEEEEEEESUMBODY!!!!!"
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Last edited by Suav; 04-26-2010 at 04:01 PM.
It's hard to take you seriously cause it seems that you just want people to say only what you want to hear. There is no shame in taking time on you're craft.
You're not ill. It's not to say that you can't be, but your rhymes aren't anything special as far as I have seen. That is the truth and if you get mad then that would be a reflection of your frustration as an upstart rapper/producer.
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Last edited by Suav; 04-26-2010 at 04:01 PM.
I only made the ill comment based on what response you wanted out of people. I may not know you well enough, but you honestly set yourself up for that. If you weren't taking it seriously then you have to expect people will let you know how they really feel.Originally Posted by Suav
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Last edited by Suav; 04-26-2010 at 04:02 PM.
^ u talk like a queer, stick you madness in your ass, "its jus i know im better then most " ? wtf are u smokin man? you got the self esteem of a retarded kid
"At the party when i move my body, gotta get up and BEEEEEEEESUMBODY!!!!!"
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