Moving Up From Going In

[Aesop Chi Odi]

I use to write about the surface
Long before I had discovered means of being true to you and me
Means everything I see its purpose

Defeated
That old paradigm that had me locked down
Imprisoned in my mind where peace and oneness I had not found

Completed
Rose up against my own stubbornness
I use to fear my resurrection like a shadow government

Indeed its
Another lost on some other biz
Then I found self and sense of peace I made a convenant

I promise to be true to me And develop my unity
I listen to the lessons learning from others aint new to me
I swear that every day Is peace and everything I do I teach
Equality, actions speak, my life is technology
My struggles a part of me through it strengthen my heart and peace
The art is me, breath it in, vivid like it oughta be

If you don’t know yourself you will once you speak to the god in me

[SKAMPOE]

dooope

[Lost Sun]

Very nice fam....I really enjoyed this read....I like how u came w/a slightly different rhyming style...


I promise to be true to me And develop my unity
I listen to the lessons learning from others aint new to me
I swear that every day Is peace and everything I do I teach
Equality, actions speak, my life is technology
My struggles a part of me through it strengthen my heart and peace
The art is me, breath it in, vivid like it oughta be


^^your closing was dope...really brought it home, like a outro should....feeling the inner search vibe of this...and so true....the resurrection like a shadow gov't was a dope line too....nice drop

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[Mantra]

Completed
Rose up against my own stubbornness
I use to fear my resurrection like a shadow government

Indeed its
Another lost on some other biz
Then I found self and sense of peace I made a convenant

I promise to be true to me And develop my unity
I listen to the lessons learning from others aint new to me
I swear that every day Is peace and everything I do I teach
Equality, actions speak, my life is technology
My struggles a part of me through it strengthen my heart and peace
The art is me, breath it in, vivid like it oughta be


^^your closing was dope

[Aesop Chi Odi]

I'll be sure to comment on your verses as well. I write all the time but I always dispose of them. I like to post them on the internet because then i dont have the opportunity delete this stuff.

Its a lot of skill at this board people a lot better then where Im at or where im going. Preciate the comments. Keep writing.