Jabba Jaw **Thread**

[Jabba Jaw]

pshyco doctor shizz for all those with a screw loose
hangin each patient seperatley with a new noose
lol
here we go

this cunts trife, fuck ya ciggarettes ima stunt life
wit no urgency i perform surgery wit a blunt knife
pump ya blood stream full of morphene
ive killed many but need to hear more scream
would you stop bleeding please!
your making it fuckin hard to keep the floor clean
stop crying, i see the wound through ya torn jeans
oooh looks realy bad, full leg ammputation is vital
stop squirming,dont move i kill patients just like you
do you know how it feels to have satan inside you?
didnt think so, nurse shut up and pass the hack saw
no no,dont need anesthetic thats what the bats for
grab the louisville slugger n club the fool on the head
now grab that towel n mop the blood pool on the bed
stop bein stoopid, do your job, chin up n wipe ya tears
been cuttin people open with the same knife for years
mr smith, how do you feel? hey im askin you sumthin
hes too scared to anwnser me as im laughin n cuttin
chuckelin to myself, i never feel sorry for my patients
there all the same,just another body for my basement

juss a quicky

[Father N Dangerous]

this cunts trife, fuck ya ciggarettes ima stunt life
wit no urgency i perform surgery wit a blunt knife
pump ya blood stream full of morphene
ive killed many but need to hear more scream

that was genius man, u tight fa sho stay up

[Grim Reapa]

i agree with spok3n and Tampon good all around verse u stayed on point throughout props

[noel411]

Hahahaha, that was fuckin' awesome man. Very entertaining, and pretty well penned in terms of flow and rhyme schemes too.

[Jabba Jaw]

thanx for the feedback peeps

[Jabba Jaw]

day 1
i couldnt sleep, so damn sick of the way he treats me
his newports gone,i dont smoke but still he beats me
told him i didnt take em just to make him believe me
im shakin in the basement thats were they leave me
gettin away with it's hard, but commitin murder is easy
im tryin to stay alive n aint even heard of the beegees

day 2
he gets home late from a bad day at his work
i know ima get hit if im in the way of this jerk
as i drink by myself, im pullin out my hair in my hands
and i think to myself, why am i so scared of this man
hes my father, im his son he should always love me
put no one above me,but he'd rather hit me than hug me
its not the bruises or the scars n the burns that bug me
its the fact that im startin to turn n this is gona get ugly

one week later
thank god, finally done, dugg a deep hole dark as a well
gotta put dad in there cause his corpse startin to smell
im smilin ,his head look kinda funny wit the spade dugg in
but damn his ass stinkin, gotta go find the glade plug in
might watch hawaii five o later, afterall i like that show
oh shit! gotta bury moms as well, never did like that ho
ahhh job done n now the pizzas here, ima slayin this kid
let me grab the axe,he expectin money but i aint payin for shit

THE END

lol
yall probly thinkin im fucked up but i aint
i let the pizza boy go LOL

more of a story than a verse really but felt like doin sumthin different

[Immaculate]

demented, you a sick individual, just kidding man, i like it though, the whole thing was dope from line one to line done.

[TUCO]

day 1
i couldnt sleep, so damn sick of the way he treats me
his newports gone,i dont smoke but still he beats me
told him i didnt take em just to make him believe me
im shakin in the basement thats were they leave me
gettin away with it's hard, but commitin murder is easy
im tryin to stay alive n aint even heard of the beegees

day 2
he gets home late from a bad day at his work
i know ima get hit if im in the way of this jerk
as i drink by myself, im pullin out my hair in my hands
and i think to myself, why am i so scared of this man
hes my father, im his son he should always love me
put no one above me,but he'd rather hit me than hug me
its not the bruises or the scars n the burns that bug me
its the fact that im startin to turn n this is gona get ugly

one week later
thank god, finally done, dugg a deep hole dark as a well
gotta put dad in there cause his corpse startin to smell
im smilin ,his head look kinda funny wit the spade dugg in
but damn his ass stinkin, gotta go find the glade plug in
might watch hawaii five o later, afterall i like that show
oh shit! gotta bury moms as well, never did like that ho
ahhh job done n now the pizzas here, ima slayin this kid
let me grab the axe,he expectin money but i aint payin for shit

THE END

lol
yall probly thinkin im fucked up but i aint
i let the pizza boy go LOL

more of a story than a verse really but felt like doin sumthin different

wow dude...this whole peice had a steady flow....very good read yo, mad props to u man....refreshing to hear SOMETHING good come outta this damn forum

[Jabba Jaw]

preciate the love peeps

thanks

[the funky drunk]

day 1
i couldnt sleep, so damn sick of the way he treats me
his newports gone,i dont smoke but still he beats me
told him i didnt take em just to make him believe me
im shakin in the basement thats were they leave me
gettin away with it's hard, but commitin murder is easy
im tryin to stay alive n aint even heard of the beegees

day 2
he gets home late from a bad day at his work
i know ima get hit if im in the way of this jerk
as i drink by myself, im pullin out my hair in my hands
and i think to myself, why am i so scared of this man
hes my father, im his son he should always love me
put no one above me,but he'd rather hit me than hug me
its not the bruises or the scars n the burns that bug me
its the fact that im startin to turn n this is gona get ugly

one week later
thank god, finally done, dugg a deep hole dark as a well
gotta put dad in there cause his corpse startin to smell
im smilin ,his head look kinda funny wit the spade dugg in
but damn his ass stinkin, gotta go find the glade plug in
might watch hawaii five o later, afterall i like that show
oh shit! gotta bury moms as well, never did like that ho
ahhh job done n now the pizzas here, ima slayin this kid
let me grab the axe,he expectin money but i aint payin for shit

THE END

lol
yall probly thinkin im fucked up but i aint
i let the pizza boy go LOL

more of a story than a verse really but felt like doin sumthin different

ha , nice