Lookin for feedback on this beat

**llBARlllCODEll** · 08-20-2011, 10:44 AM

http://www.box.net/shared/ovb7ybkn0lzxh9elfa7x

**KSTVRLSN** · 08-20-2011, 11:31 AM

Well first of, the intro is really loud compared to the rest of the stuff, made me a little confused if the drums were too low or something..
I guess you haven't mixed that yet ?

Flute sample is nice, but the whole beat feels a little 'empty'.

Overall impression is that it could turn out to a really nice beat if you fix that shit !

Peace

**THE MASON** · 08-20-2011, 11:52 AM

the break down for me was the illlest part, but i agree with what KST was saying.

its more a mix problem then an overall beat problem imo, the vibe of the joitn was ill as fuck, those flutes were on some war shit no doubt.

2 things might help, a real chunky bassline, something simple. one note every lead kick or something. or add another layer from the sample in there, like a one shot that hits on the snare drum ( just be careful cause the one shot gotta carry the melody thru to the next chop still)

hope some of that makes sense. good work tho fam, glad you on the up n up as well. def a more well rounded sound since i last heard

**llBARlllCODEll** · 08-20-2011, 08:01 PM

fuck man....i upped the wrong beat!! i guess thats what i get for bein in a rush.

here's the right beat

http://www.box.net/shared/ovb7ybkn0lzxh9elfa7x

lmao...i already know yall are gonna say the mix is horrible, im workin on it

i need feed on how its constructed and if all the parts sound like they go together

(i hope not to many people checked it, thats my august battle beat)

peace KSTV and Bronze for comin thru tho

**Caper** · 08-21-2011, 04:24 AM

lower the effects that you using meaning the volume add a little reverb to the hihat and you can loer some samples down a lil , you also need bass but so far I like it

**Caper** · 08-21-2011, 04:45 AM

sounds good to me though gives the track a living feeling with details

**noisebeat** · 08-21-2011, 05:29 AM

That's remind me RZA beats.
I like this ambiance.

**LORD ZERO** · 08-21-2011, 02:58 PM

The 2nd half of this beat is fuckin insane man, lovin the atmospherics in this overall tho

**Jonny Details** · 08-21-2011, 03:53 PM

thas a dope beat homie nice skillz

**SKAMPOE** · 08-22-2011, 11:11 PM

this beat is rly dope, if it was chunkier it be fuckin illllll

lmao @ max on there, dope!

my fav part is when the drums solo

**llBARlllCODEll** · 08-23-2011, 12:04 AM

peace & thanks for comin thru everybody. would rep if i could. im lookin to add somethin. ima let it chill for a while.

yo Skampoe, i was trying to make a Killah Emcees remix but i couldnt get the vocals to work right. all the vocals i left in it sounded dope so i left those in there.

surprised u didnt notice Style's sinister laugh and Grave's 1, 2 lol