aztekmonk's thread ( feedz pleaze )

[aztekmonk]

metah4 splash session
yo secluded in the cipher alone with ma inner voice
ma mental patterns fertilize tha mic n sire this metahphors
emitted as aztek syntaxes splashin images in yo visual
ma verbal expression of inner visions
is out of this dimension so yo mind gatta be in outer space
to conceive tha mural ma verse hit tha intellectand ressurect
dead cells in die hard brain
signals of reincarnation bleep as u try to grasp tha
essence of ma breathe if yo grip aint magnetic
i could jus derail yo thought n let misconception be yo destiny
ma interact with tha mic conceive this lines
that infiltrate all hip hop ciphers n elevate tha intellect session
tha four minute trance instill the essential knowledge that hip hops still
kickin n die hards still meditatin splashin metahphors in the lab session
heal tha wound in ma ear canal inflicted by one dimensioanl pussie rappaz
emittin that weak sound tryna pass it off as hip hop
catch me in the session splashin that metahphor n elevatin this cipher
to the third dimension

[the funky drunk]

nice

[aztekmonk]

yo any mo comments on that verse

[aztekmonk]

yo ma physical ounceless as the hands transit me thru eras
innocence shed as ma soul gets scarred,visions of the past
engraved in ma mind so the present reflect ma roots
the future ,jus a brailled earthling tryna peep sunlight
mentally brailled cant peep ma flow
tha intellect extract the ore from the aztek core
clock tickin symbolizin ma acquisition of hip hop tecniks
so i can dare step into thu wu cipher n spit ma mind
elevate ma kind stuck on the path to the unknown destination
sunday sessions tell us our actions determine the destiny
so i try to walk the narrow but situations gat me deviatin
cant profess to be righteous when evil seeds tryna sprout
in ma mind so i dig into ma heart n unearth vague traces of
humanity hopin to choke out the seeds of devility tryna strangle
ma personality ma existence done witnessed man subcumbin to
the will of the supanatural ,to a point where we reduced to pawns
on a chess board so i keep breathin waitin for the hands to carry
me to ma final abode

yo man jus a piece of ma mind ,shit this aint even exactly how am feelin
sometimes its jus hard to verbally emit yo mind word peace to the hip hop.

[GuardianOne]

yo ma physical ounceless as the hands transit me thru eras
innocence shed as ma soul gets scarred,visions of the past
engraved in ma mind so the present reflect ma roots
the future ,jus a brailled earthling tryna peep sunlight
mentally brailled cant peep ma flow
tha intellect extract the ore from the aztek core
clock tickin symbolizin ma acquisition of hip hop tecniks
so i can dare step into thu wu cipher n spit ma mind
elevate ma kind stuck on the path to the unknown destination
sunday sessions tell us our actions determine the destiny
so i try to walk the narrow but situations gat me deviatin
cant profess to be righteous when evil seeds tryna sprout
in ma mind so i dig into ma heart n unearth vague traces of
humanity hopin to choke out the seeds of devility tryna strangle
ma personality ma existence done witnessed man subcumbin to
the will of the supanatural ,to a point where we reduced to pawns
on a chess board so i keep breathin waitin for the hands to carry
me to ma final abode

Hey hows north east africa. Nice ! i see you use a lot of slang or ight be the type of style you have. Its an interesting verse. i suppose you were busting.

Keep posting- i would like to see more of your verses.

Peace
PS: Keep up the good work!

[jjh_38]

commentin on ur 1st verse.... ehhh.. i dunno man.. i was searchin for a flow and it jus wasn't there... fuck, it didnt even rhyme really...... even tho your lyrics were slightly intersesting it came off as random babbles...

[aztekmonk]

yo guardian kenyas aight,mainstreams fucked but allota cats tryna maintain hip hop in the basements word,by the way zimbabwe should be holdin it down i always thought u n south A
are the muthalands deepest hip hop zones,
i wasnt bustin that rap those verses jus hit me suddenly while i was logged on this cipher peace keep it hip hop

[denaturat]

noticed you used the words like metaphors, splashing and dimentioned a number of times, sounded a bit redundant, if this is free style it's cool I guess, it doesn't sound too polished, you should post some written shit - filtered and edited. as for rhymes, contrary to what some said above, they are there, just not in conventional places, you notice as you flow with it

[GuardianOne]

yo guardian kenyas aight,mainstreams fucked but allota cats tryna maintain hip hop in the basements word,by the way zimbabwe should be holdin it down i always thought u n south A
are the muthalands deepest hip hop zones,
i wasnt bustin that rap those verses jus hit me suddenly while i was logged on this cipher peace keep it hip hop

Nice to know all is alright. Yah true keep the lyrics underground. Well you know how RAP is here in Africa, but keep to the good work and keep posting up in here. Okay, that cool keep working on your style and lyrics.

Take Care

Peace
PS: There's Dupreez from SA also up in here.