Grims Final Chapter

[Grim Reapa]

Fase in like a preminition
Leave with suspitions, Dead, gettin inbaulmed ny mortitions
Thoughts turn down to hour zero
Its clear tho, I came on corp to to voice my opinions
Not be a hero...

Remember me R.I.P. to the vet
Dont forget, I'll roam this mother fucka with a vengence u will regret
To the vets of the battlefield, keep winning
Turn the page fast, I'll soon make a new begining


lil corny shit keep fightin dont forget me ya'll

[Dae Ja Nae]

What's G R?

I see you're thinking about not posting on this site anymore ... how come?

BTW, I didn't know you were 14. That being said, you have your whole life ahead of you, with plenty of options to explore, so don't be so down, okay? As far as you not being a "rapper" is concerned ... I'm sure that a lot of the cats you listen to everyday had that very same thought. Where would they be if they would have given up? If you believe in the game, you have to fight for it. Just keep at it and in time it will be like second nature to you. You'll be spittin' shit in your sleep ... but, you can't just give up ... and above all else, you have to want it first. You feel me?


Keep your head up, and ...

Peace

[denaturat]

your shit is morbid your mind's out of orbit
in darkness and confusion you seem lost like dat hobbit
my suggestion, go get a psychiatric session
cause sounds like yo ass may have serious depression
pent up agression and sexual repressions
too much dope, playstation and constant masturbation

fascination with apoclaypse and death
bro, this shit ain'g good fo yo health, so check yo self!
dark thoughts runs through synapses
traps like maze until you sanity snaps and collapses
end up on matress with straight jacket
tight stall padded white walls back and forth rockin'



my lil corny shit, nothin personal, meant to be humorous. peace...

[denaturat]

You keep throwin it down. If you're fourteen, you'll be dope at 20. Your vocabulary is very good, I thought you were much older. Keep it up, study rhyme, and take a break once in a while. It clears your mind, and you always come back with more juice.

[Ballad Ballistik]

dae some real nice words ...sounded like something i told him....
but dont forget the age factor..
nothing more than a actor..?
i left some words of concerns...
not so sure if i should of...
enough said peace.