^^^Pharaoh Snefru - Strait Up^^^

[Pharaoh Snefru]

Peace to all, this shit is some shit I did not to long ago. I never wrote any of this, just thought about it and spit freely. The sound is a little fucked up, but the beat was too when I got it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4166356

[Hellspawn]

beat is awesome and the flowz on point, especially the firsts bars of the verse 2...ha haaa i like it!!

[ERN-DAWGY]

sick i liked it

[Pharaoh Snefru]

Thanks yo, good lookin out.

[Grimey Fruitbat]

this beat is fuckin fire.....

your delivery is nice...lyrics sound iight, got that lil sunz of man vibe going for you wit the tonalities....only problem i find wit this is that your flow sounds off in many parts, lemme listen again, ummm, basically sounds as if you don't rhyme wit a cadence, just rhyme wherever, on some 9th prince from killarmy shit, not necessarily as bad as him, cuz he has NO structure as well, however, it sounds like you could structure you raps better, not sure if it's due to you spittin it off the noggan.....ummm yeah, that's the feedback, rise up...