through songs i write, my wrongs i right
if you wanna fight the power, get the power to fight
1st off i want to thank taco for his continuous support. I dont know where i would be today without him being on my nuts, thanks.
as for jallainINS, you are one of the rare people on the site that tries to keep shit peaceful and always keeps it real, thanks for peeping my rhymes, who else likes this verse?
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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It's definatley your best work, I sensed multies and rhyme schemes present that you haven't written before...your elevating I would continue on this.
my 2 cents
thanks for the feedback vern, and thanks for reading the verses, peace
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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check my last verse on audio, just click the link, peace
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its aiiiiiiiiiiight, but holly what duz ur name mean?
i am a real estate agent, in hollywood, so thats how hollywoodrealty came about, and the butcher dates back to my days working in a restaurant, cutten shit up, and when i would bust some raps, this dude said yo, watch out, the butcher cutten up that track, and thus the butcher was born
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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any feedback
but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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time to bring my thread back to life......check out this piece i wrote called the ten commandments, then click the link to hear it in audio, peace
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We know there are Ten Commandments, bcuz the Bible tells us so in three places
bust your scriptures from your book cases
He proclaimed to you his covenant
which he commanded you to keep: the Ten Commandments
which was written on two tablets of stone
But there are 14 statements of God in the Decalogue
and experts count up to 25 statements, it was shown.
So, how do you come out with just "Ten"?... thats unknown
because their division is not fixed in the Bible
so man had to deciefer the codes for survivol
so some have to be joined together and then
thats how they came up with the number 10
1.) I am the Lord the god and thou shalt not have any strange gods before me.
this is the beginning of the story
2.) Thou shalt not take the Lord's name in vain.
god damnit, why are we on this planet, i cant explain
3.) Remember to keep holy the Lord's Day.
the sabbath, thats when i reak havik and dismay
4.)they say u must Honor thy Father and Mother.
but all of god's brothers declare war, run for cover
5.) Thou shalt not kill
bloody murder, red rum, bread crumbs get crushed then wine spills
6.) Thou shalt not commit adultery
but sex sells, so many chicken heads end up as poultry
7.) Thou shalt not steal.
but stick up kids would split your wig, cap's peel, tires squeel
8.) Thou shalt not bear false witness against their neighbor
but our minds controled by what we read in the paper
9.) Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's wife
desperate housewives with sharp knives will end your life
10.) Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's goods
unless they rich and u stealen for the poor like robinhood
im hoping that my words arent misunderstood
my ten commandments, my realty's your hollywood
Textually, there may be twelve commandments if one observes only the sentence structure
But they are obviously "ten" in number, hence different methods of numbering them have been adopted, and they have been traditionally sorted into ten groups... and various faiths sort them differently
That thou mightest fear the LORD thy God, to keep all his statutes and his commandments, which I command thee, thou, and thy son, and thy son's son, all the days of thy life; and that thy days may be prolonged.
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