Quit Fuckin up Hip Hop.

[Mahzel]

Bitchez like Young Joc are fuckin up Hip Hop,
I think Young Dro should lean himself out a window,
I cant believe these mockeries so god damn populah,
as if this is the middle ages and that shit is like-operah.

Lil' Jon doesnt sing, and doesnt rap,
he gets paid just to yell random crap.
Their whole bullshit hook is a bunch of actions
Snap ya fingaz, while i make deadly bone fractions
Maybe that'll stop you from movie actin'
Flicks like ATL, actin' skillz is what it was lackin.

And These lyrics are getting fuckin rediculous,
their loss of story ideas is plainly conspicous.
Adjectiveless yet gory descriptions,
the storys are all thug-life fictions,
Full of wack verbs, no other words,
Tellin you which way to dace, its absurd.

I put poison in ya "blingin" pimp cup,
bottoms high, bitch, drink that shit up,
Last sip of ya of anything that yul ever take,
cuz that bollocks you blastin is havin my head ache.

[Lil' Ruger]

pretty good

[Mahzel]

Thank you, any one else got comments?

[Sirkulayshun]

pretty good.......liked the vocab and the lines were well said

"I cant believe these mockeries so god damn populah,
as if this is the middle ages and that shit is like-operah."
"Snap ya fingaz, while i make deadly bone fractions"
"Adjectiveless yet gory descriptions"

those were some of the best lines......overall it was good
keep it up
peace

[Mantra]

That was decent , one up!