Spartibus V Sickarocks..

[Spartibus]

8 Bars..
House Rules..

Sicka battling me is netcee suicide/ thou my scope place
the hairs on your grill/ leaving you crosseyed//

or stick a blade in your ribs that my hand guides/ so you
can tell ppl/ i'm like a thorn in one's side//

you see i'm pedigree/ hit you with punchlines you'll have
so many stiches/ ppl will think your a tapestry//

before you spit you i've out done/ RoCKs understand son/
i got more SIcKA bars than alcoholics vomit on//

bitch please do like the jet stream and breeze/you ain't a thug
sitting on dough/but your raps do fall off like sesame seeds//

battling me is a mis-match and should never be/ like a man with
1 lung and cancer getting better/whilst recievin chemotherapy//

i'm schooling you with metaphores/ so you'll know the score/
with just text i could rock heads/ like Mount Rushmore//

if you wrote your verse in an apartment/ you still wouldn't be
complex/ beating me is like audio being displayed throu text//



SICKAROCKS verse..
when u came in the battlefield all i sensed was a shrimp.../
makin friendz askin questions lookin like a wimp.../
im insane in the membrane B-ein realer than shit.../
u aint shit to the field 0 for 0, bout to get bit.../
snatch off your neck quicka than deck.../
i smoke bluntz of trainwreck before i fuck up your set.../
earnin shit faster than amtrak.../
you'll feel like i peeled your cap back like a mac when i suflex u to the mat.../
look at me i fuck u up wether u mad at me or not.../
fightin me'd be like teamin up gracie,tito an shamrock.../
when i break em off a break em off alot..
shit i dont even wanna think about u i look to ox up some crops.../
infact im comin over to your crib right now.../
ima be the cat dipped in a 100 thou.../
this cat'll be wearin a pink wife beater makin out with his couch.../
after i take u out ima bump wu an throwdown wit myself in your house.../
callin out catz aint hard why u stutterin to everyone like a bitch?.../
ill extuingish your life you'll be reborn a crazed meth baby all retarded

I've modified this thread to include sicka's verse.....

[Lil' Ruger]

ooooo i'll like this.im ready for a laugh.

[Spartibus]

Upping Both Verses Peeps.....

[Sicka than aidZ]

yeah thats pretty dope spar looks like i was rappin bout yesterday

[Spartibus]

yesterday i was testin' water...lol..

[Lil' Ruger]

haha

[Spartibus]

^^stop freeposting,

Upping Both Verses ppl.

[Spartibus]

^^As Above....

[Lil' Ruger]

hmmm i'd say sicka he's more experienced he knows whathe's doing it looks like you were trying to get the batlle field feel (as i am) this site has dope MC's and you HAVE to keep elevating to keep up. you need teh work on ur flow and jokes a lil more. like me i needed work on my jokes if u ever got a good one not telling you to cheat but write it down somewhere and so you dont feel guilt memorize it! frankly even though it was for fun i think u bitin off more then you can chew you shudda just sparred wit ppl that have no stripes YET like me and then went from there all in all great clash!