The Official Poetry Thread

[illlx]

mad strange how life can change through time sequential
perceptively deranged but nearly god in his mental
through distorted projections static mic connections
a student of life with eternal reflections
take anything near everything you hold dear
adjust your minds eye make sure the pictures clear
dont take it for what it is see its deeper understanding
find your place for what its worth on firm earth you'll be standing
forgive the flaws I present thats my human nature
the light shining through is the aura of the creator
a product of my enviornment im everything it made me
just gotta work with what the most high gave me
i utilize the pen as an extension of my hand
my minds a desert thoughts are grains of sand
this poetry represents a universal life cycle
connect at anytime with anything that you might do

[LORD ZERO]

Yo...........

Will I Ever Truly Smile In This Lifetime
Looking From The Outside In
As A Treasure I Searched The Ends Of The Earth For
Is Now In Inconsiderate Hands
Without Even A Second Look Into My Soul
My Sanity Cracks As I Wonder If This Is Divine Payback
For The Hearts I Broken
Its Seems All I'll Ever Have Is Music & Occasional Smoking
Never Have I Smiled In My Recent Pictures
For There Is No True Reason To
Especially Not Here
In This Day And Age
Another Chance Stolen
Re-opened Scars
Anger Rises
Tears Fall
Painful Truth
Staring At Stars
Wondering Endlessly
How Could This Happen
Why Me
What Could I Have Done To Deserve This
Nothing Seems To Subside These Thoughts
This Rage
This Anger
This Jealousy
These Emotions
This Seemingly Fruitless Journey
My Desires
My Sadness
My Destiny
My Search For A Rare Jewel..............

[PHXorcist]

Lord come rescue us from this treacherous replica of history's
misery & undiscovered mystery,
Gun love epiphany, i'll blow you into infinity.
Mud runs where the rivers deep,
A crescent red sun hovers above the giving tree,
You heard my battlecry symphony allied with undead infantry,
20,000 leagues down in the sea,
drowning but free, we witness the crowning of kings.
I bring a surrounding of dreams where things are not what they seem,
Apocalypse theme.......(album in '08, i'll post snippets of the track soon)

I'd like feedback, thx.

This a verse from the track "White Zombie" on my album "City of Fire", dropping mid '08.

PHXorcist of the South West - Phoenix Rising 2007

[PHXorcist]

Your new instrumentals are very inspiration Zero thx.

[PHXorcist]

Rewrote some verses from the original song to some of your instrumentals, which is why I want feedback to see if I should switch with these new verses.

[SID]

COUNTING DOWN THE CHURCH BELLS

a cracked earth, seaping streams of blood
a locked birth, running my fingers through the mud
to get a sense of existence and resistance
deliverence to the divine, in time truth will be revealed
constantly changing no defenition of real
i peel the outer skin of my shell, living in hell
counting down the church bells

[PHXorcist]

Colossal man made machines storm a land that was once green,
Blowing the countryside into smitherines with heavy artillery,
While aircrafts rain death from above,
Bringing down lightning upon villagers,
Vikings were found to be similar.

[wuswordz95]

this is the 2nd time on this thread.

well I aint no poet. I dont consider what I write poetry.

Years of benevolence has faded.

It has vanished in to the unknown criteria.
Oh No! I feel so inferior.
Neutralize weapons from the superior
Neglect those that don’t matter, despite attraction.
Escape the beauty of deceit.


Created a journey to search for 1,992 diamonds.
Incredidible, shinning glass reflect the queen of the 90's
Never did I complete the journey, due to stagnation.
Down went my significant other.
Yield to a master plan, I did not

Crippled thoughts of the present
On to a path I know no longer how to conquer
Never give up on a dream that contains forever love
Never drive the nails in to the hands of the clever
Ignorance, is my permanent painful label
Exit visions, which lead to a tear jerker fable.

[SID]

"TRUTH ADMIST THE LIES" (countin down the church bells pt.2)


crimson streams of steaming liquid seap down the moutainside
an abonimation, and example of hate and genocide
praying to the sky, to find my inner self, another soul on sinner shelf
i quiver, like crack babies on rabies, stearing through a window at the shady
depths the world has crep to, my veins strain, but complain i cant do
i chant tunes of self preservation, planting seeds for the global restoration
of mankind, iam just trying to find truth admist the lies

[KERZO]

yo, i work for the devil but he never works for me
The beguiled emcee getting tied up to a tree
No one ever raps about the shit they cant handle
Like a boss whos a dick in a job thats a scandal
I need the money for food, living life and smokin weed
But arseholes fuck ya about and make ya wanna leave
so whats the point in doing it, i simply never plead
cos in the end its just me and my family that will exceed

[Koolish]

Expression of Machinery

Tactile responses have cluttered thoughts,
while the lonely remnants are discovered.
Armored instances are impulsively bought
as the truth is last to be uncovered.
So few decades have aged a man
than those which were uncertain.
Yet when the toll of time began
we rebuilt an iron curtain.

[SID]

"INSIDE"

i scream into the abyss, for fear of what ive missed
silent tears in the mist, my dear i crave your kiss
to guide me through the concrete jungle
to guide me through my thoughts asunder
to guide me through false laws and blunders
to guide me through the poor and the lovers
all i see is life slowly moulding and contoling my will
ink soaking my quill, ready to write bright lines
but i have to take the time to find myself inside....

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

"INSIDE"

i scream into the abyss, for fear of what ive missed
silent tears in the mist, my dear i crave your kiss
to guide me through the concrete jungle
to guide me through my thoughts asunder
to guide me through false laws and blunders
to guide me through the poor and the lovers
all i see is life slowly moulding and contoling my will
ink soaking my quill, ready to write bright lines
but i have to take the time to find myself inside....

nice poem

[Revolution]

You crawl

All over my left ball

Make me fall off the wall

Met you at the mall

Took off your draws

In the bathroom stall

Made me call

Embarrassing; you were short (I was tall)

Love,

PAUL

[Unda_Fiya]

Counting shades of grey, my final resting place
How can I live today when my hopes displaced
To another place, hold out your hand
Take this image of me and try to understand
Why I say these words, don’t make me look absurd
Tell me you know why I think I’m disturbed
Release those easy words, tell me all about
How I’m ok, no ounce of doubt
Cos now my sights gone grey and its wrong inside
Cross the water here, take the bridge to blyth
Stop half the way, look down as it flows
Like a cold release from hells own abode
So cold then the calm before the storm
Where my heart feels fine my souls not torn
Push into my eyes feel the blind today
I would rather see black than these shades of grey.
Paint me a picture in red and blue
Bruise this portrait of me to look like you
Sing me a story with words that say
our world is filled with shades of grey
Paint me a picture, in shades of grey
A portrait of how we live today
Sing me a story with words that mean
Something, anything, everything to me