HollywoodRealty AKA Da Butcher (Official Thread)

[Eversick666]

yep thats a pretty good one
madd science

[hollywoodrealty]

thanks man, ya i was on the science tip, glad u enjoyed it though, peace

[Eversick666]

no prob just tellin it how it is
peeped some others too, quite dope...
stay up
one hundred
eversick666

[hollywoodrealty]

oh i see u are from canada aye, no wonder u and god concept hooked up, i see ya'll doing your thang too in your thread, keep writing and thanks for the feed, peace

[Eversick666]

concept is a good friend of mine known him since i was a little
kid man, grew up wit the devilish mutherfucker.
drop in the spit boxer thread anytime..
and it's EH!
peace
eversick666

[VernakuLa]

life is sweet, i come back like the Heat and defeat
all you Mavericks, ya'll dont wanna see my bag of tricks
I got a magician's hat, but i dont pull out rabbits
i pull out automatics, it all adds up, do the mathamatics
it might be traumatic, take your life, thats how i subract
im charismatic, possesing the ability to attract
now thats a fact, no longer a hypothesis
i use calculus and the theory of limits to produce my anaylis
i do a dialysis with the seperation of substances
i make it dificult for you just like encumbrances
life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down
nobody's playing around, this aint no carnival fool
my words serve as an essential component, call it the cardinal rule
the microphone's my tool, bout to school you like a profesor
brainwash you, control your thoughts just like an oppressor
nothing lesser, confinent and assertive, known as a aggressor
im the king, who is worthy of being my successor
feel the pressure, enough to make your head explode
solve the hidden code in order to have the truth exposed

lines in red i was really feelin, good shit 1

[hollywoodrealty]

thank u for the input vern, keep your eyes open bcuz im feelen the flow lately, trying to drop 3-5 quality rhymes a week

[jallainINS]

i like the heat and mav's reference that was cool. and the lines the vern highlighted were the ones i was feelin too. nice flow im lookin forward to some more stuff from you.

[hollywoodrealty]

yo thanks for the comments, even when u write something good there is still room for improvement, ill try and make every line of the next one amazing, thanks and peace

[Liquid Lines]

Good stuff, as always

"life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down"

Like it.

[hollywoodrealty]

yo liquid lines, thanks for the shot out, im glad u are enjoying the writings, ill be dropping another one soon, thanks and peace

[VernakuLa]

drop sumun nija!

[hollywoodrealty]

spit flames, burn bodies, creamated into dust
when my rhymes combust they hit harder then uppercuts
and just when u adjust, the torture continues
fill you with disease that leaves you frozen like an igloo
what to do?, you cant protest the slugfest
bodies lay unclaimed, mass graves filled with names anonymous
its nothing humorus, the casualties are numerous
our lives are in danger before we even leave the uterus
its nothing new to us, same shit different day
when things escalade, all my thoughts are in disarray
disobey the lord and you'll get a scorning
in ways of earthquakes, tsunamies, and hurricane warnings
will you ever live to see another morning, close your eyes
do you get to open them or will you feel demise
no compromise, im never selling my soul
ancient skrolls retold in testaments, new and old
behold, the future told, as i read your palm
i stay calm while i read versus out of psalms
when im gone, my body will be embalmed like king tut
closed the tomb, leave the room, doors swing shut





yo i wrote this peace to another dope ass beat from mantis aka grandmassive, here is a link, listen as u read along


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4193226

[hollywoodrealty]

any feedback?

[hollywoodrealty]

nobody feelen this?